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nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

0 posted 2001-04-04 08:59 AM

No Joy in Mudville

Awoke this morning, overcome
Sadness filled the air.
And watered down my landscaping,
Leaving feelings bare.

Those muddied thoughts kept me in check,
No hopefulness in sight.
Sighing, deeply, wishing for
A Knight filled want of night.

Borrowing a few words sweet
My mind stirs, once again.
"A thousand kisses", echo each
Wondering "if" and "when".

There is no joy in Mudville,
Remembering I, those words.
The loneliness, I feel this day,
From emptiness I heard.

My inner soul is wanting out,
To feel again, embrace.
The sorrow's in containment now,
A suffering, needs erase.

Await I will, 'til darkness falls
To feel your breath cascade.
"If" only in my dreams of heart
"When" loving never fades.

Invaded mind, my body, soul
In corner painted tight,
Protected I, then feel caressed
when Knight shows in my night.

To last me through the moonheld sky
That reigns from up above
"If" and "When" the tears have dried
No scars... just joy of love.

~Wynter...
a friendly challenge of title
with Kethry to see, compare...
my morning began quite dismal
with a Knight of dreams to only share

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II

Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

1 posted 2001-04-04 09:15 AM

Oh Wynter this is so good. I wish I'd read this first, then I could have adapted mine so I had a chance of "taking the title"

write on
Kethry

Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen.

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

2 posted 2001-04-04 09:15 AM

Wynter~ I just read Kethry's and now yours...wow...they are both fantastic.....if not a bit sad....

SEA

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

3 posted 2001-04-04 02:46 PM

Kethry and SEA..thank you both..just one of those mood swing days I guess...

*s
~Wynter

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

4 posted 2001-04-04 03:31 PM

Sighing, deeply, wishing for
A Knight filled want of night.
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Well done. WELL done.

Live for love. Without love, you don't live.

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

5 posted 2001-04-04 05:40 PM

Lovely, Maureen, just lovely

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

6 posted 2001-04-07 01:20 AM

Interloper and Kathleen, thank you both for reading

~Wynter

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II

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