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Tom26
Junior Member
since 2000-05-07
Posts 30


0 posted 2001-04-04 01:05 AM


hey guys, i know i haven't been around in a while and most of you probably don't remember me, but i thought i'd send out a little love to someone very special and close to my heart

A WARM PLACE

I close my eyes and
Fall in deep
To a place
A place in my heart
A warm place

And as I fall
I see you there
Falling with me
Dancing with me in
A warm place

I want to hold you
Know your touch
Feel your soul
Be with you in
A warm place

Our faults slip away
The ugliness of the world
Can’t reach us here
We are as one in
A warm place

Your light shines
For me to see
The beauty inside
The love from within
Our warm place

© Copyright 2001 Tom26 - All Rights Reserved
VAS
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450
Oregon
1 posted 2001-04-04 02:01 AM


Sounds like a wonderful place, I know it's more than temperature of which you speak, but I'm trying not to turn up the heat so late in the eve when it's time for bed, so I'm rather chilly here so your warm place is right where I'd like to be.
Irish Rose
Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263

2 posted 2001-04-04 04:48 AM


Nice to meet you, I liked this very much.

Kathleen Blake

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee


2dalimit
Member Elite
since 2000-02-08
Posts 2228
Mississippi coast
3 posted 2001-04-04 06:56 AM


Warm place - happy place. Sounds the same to me. I'm glad you found Your place.
Melton

WhtDove
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245
Illinois
4 posted 2001-04-04 09:49 AM


Nothing quite the like the warmth you've described here.  

Love it!

<*\\\><

I know not what the future holds,
but I know Who holds the future.

I don't question YOUR existance - GOD


Lone Wolf
Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842
Lansing, MI USA
5 posted 2001-04-04 09:57 AM


This was lovely writing, Tom.  Welcome back.  Hope you stay a while.  

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354
Listening to every heart
6 posted 2001-04-04 10:00 AM


Welcome Home - enjoyed the heartwarm....

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