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JamesBowie
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big old Bangor Maine up by the shack

0 posted 2001-04-03 11:12 PM


lighten up
or to soon
you might be
tasting the tears
of angels

© Copyright 2001 James Bowie - All Rights Reserved
doreen peri
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since 1999-05-25
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1 posted 2001-04-03 11:27 PM


"tasting the tears of angels..."

oh james.... i am SO happy to see you here... you ARE a poet.... this is wonderfully succinct and so very special in imagery......very good!!!!! my friend  

JamesBowie
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big old Bangor Maine up by the shack
2 posted 2001-04-03 11:38 PM


thanks doreen, You too. I just wanted to say thank you for reading my stuff now and then, it encourages me. J
Balladeer
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3 posted 2001-04-04 12:10 PM


I agree, James, that angel tears is a very descriptive image...nicely worded.
serenity blaze
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4 posted 2001-04-05 11:13 AM


Great advice and wonderful poem...gonna try to live this one today!
Lone Wolf
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5 posted 2001-04-05 11:18 AM


I love your style, James.

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

Sunshine
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6 posted 2001-04-05 11:38 AM


Much truth....
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