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Night_Myst
Junior Member

since 2000-08-16

Posts 34
River Falls, WI

0 posted 2001-04-03 11:02 PM

Look at me
What do you see?
I am a friend
A sister
A daughter
I am anyone
I am everyone
And I am no one at all
I am the greatest actress in the world
No one can tell
No one knows me
I am the greatest illusionist in the world
I cast my magic
You see what I want you to
You see not what I bid hidden
I am
Yet I am not
For I am an actress
And an illusionist
Please
Look at me
Tell me what you see
Please
Help me
Please

Rosebud1229
Senior Member

since 2000-04-05

Posts 1813
North Carolina

1 posted 2001-04-03 11:05 PM

what do I SEE? My that's quite easy someone just like me! We all tend to hide ourselve's from the world, in one way or another. Though what we should do is strive to be ourselve's sometimes that is the most hardest thing of all. Very good write.

Lone Wolf
Member Ascendant

since 2000-03-16

Posts 5842
Lansing, MI USA

2 posted 2001-04-03 11:06 PM

I see someone through these words that is perhaps tired of pretending to be what they are not. Maybe it is time for a change. Spring itself is a time of change. The timing is perfect. I also see deep expression here. Wonderful.

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

3 posted 2001-04-04 03:41 PM

Peek-a-boo, I see you. More importantly, I hear you.

Well done!

Live for love. Without love, you don't live.

Mysteria

Member Laureate

since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

4 posted 2001-04-04 03:46 PM

Loved interloper's reply! Time to shake off the masks girl, let them go...they will come and they also will see! Great poem and I am sure a lot of people can relate.

When spring is dancing among the hills,
one should not stay in a little dark corner
~*~ Kahlil Gibran ~*~

Maverick Wolf
Member

since 1999-11-13

Posts 94
Scandia, MN

5 posted 2001-04-08 11:55 PM

Nicely written, easy to relate to. Try not to hide, people can help you see.

Yesterday's history, tomorrow's a mystery, and today is a gift. That's why they call it the present.

BrightStar
Member

since 2001-04-08

Posts 219

6 posted 2001-04-08 11:57 PM

Good.

Brad Majors

Member Elite

since 2001-04-03

Posts 2647
Georgia

7 posted 2001-04-09 11:58 AM

Showing who we are is one of the hardest things we have to do. Thank for sharing yourself with us!

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