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Tender Introductions |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
 all I’ve ever searched for in the infinite skies... all my heart’s been needing in the still of night... everything that’s been missing from this existence of blue... you’re offering it with childlike generosity... the inspiration I’ve stumbled upon in the meadow of yellow... the style of rest I’ve found in your embrace... the suspense of anxiety that’s finally found me... I’m staring at it all straight on... the laughter of the weeping willow... the smiles of each blossoming rose... the heart of gold in the clouds above... you alone have introduced me to these demonstrations... the benefit of the view from your arms... the resonance of the advantage of this very moment... the breathtaking assurance of devotion everlasting... you’ve given it all to me on wings of splendor. -kh 04/03/01 to be with you... |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
You are lucky enough to have it, don't ever let it go. Wonderful writing! All writing comes |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SnowPants~ What a lovely inspirational write. That photo is GORGEOUS ! I like the way you worked the yellow into your piece.  ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
you alone have introduced me to these demonstrations... the benefit of the view from your arms... the resonance of the advantage of this very moment... the breathtaking assurance of devotion everlasting... you’ve given it all to me on wings of splendor. =========================== love the vocabulary in this SP... youve employed some wonderfully poetic word choices here, yet they are fresh, nothing overdone and cliched ... "resonance" .. now theres a word meant for poetry. beautiful imagery and devotions in this gem well done girlie.  It's such a clever innocence with which you show myself to me |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
LW: yes, I do feel lucky...and I won't EVER let it go...thanks, m'friend...glad you liked this! Marge: thank you, my friend...I, too, love that graphic...I am glad you enjoyed this, too! JM: hey there...thank you for your kind words...they are always such an encouragement!  sp  to be with you... I've tried to hide my passion, but it's just no use... piece by piece I lose it when you walk into the room... [This message has been edited by snowpants (edited 04-05-2001).] |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
kris- only here for a small peek...and what a beautiful gem this is! love to see you writing like this my dear friend. see i'm still watching ya  take care. amy |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
the style of rest I’ve found in your embrace... the suspense of anxiety that’s finally found me... I like this one very much!!! So often, we think of love as bringing excitement... and it does. *S* But to find peace, also... that's when you know you've found treasure! *S* |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
Aims: whew...well, that's a relief...my fan club of one has become none since you've gone!! great to see ya, girlie!! thanks!! suthern: yes, indeed...you are right...peace is quite vital in love, as I've found as well! thank you so much! I'm glad you've enjoyed this! to be with you... |
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Tennessee Angel Senior Member
since 2000-06-03
Posts 661Tennessee |
Wow, snowpants, this one blew me away! Absolutely beautiful. |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
Why thanks, TA! That means a lot to me! I'm glad you liked it! sp to be with you... |
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