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Lightning Strikes
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Lightning Strikes |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone 
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Lightning flashes overhead pale skies blacken, fill with dread. Winds arise with fiercest howl earth herself appears to scowl. Sunny life grows turbulent happy dreams abruptly spent on that day he went away rose hued sky turned ugly grey. Striking boldly, caring not of destruction he has wrought. As the lightning does not note precious beauty it has smote. Still the power does attract sit and watch the lightning crack... |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
very effective writing.... |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
Nicely written. Enjoyed your poem. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
excellent Sandra. . .  --------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Excellent descriptions! All writing comes |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Wow great imagery, loved it! |
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