Your Love Is Like Chunky Peanut Butter (Packrat Mike's Challenge)

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Just A Woman
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since 2001-03-10

Posts 507

0 posted 2001-04-03 07:48 PM

Your love is like chunky peanut butter
that I've fallen into, fully clothed
Mixed with enough of your jellious emptiness
to weight me down
Dragging myself out of it has taken
more than awhile
My best dress completely ruined
I shall meet you at the cleaners

"I can't remember if I'm the good twin or the evil one."

doreen peri
Member Elite

since 1999-05-25

Posts 3812
Virginia

1 posted 2001-04-03 08:07 PM

applause!!!!

very chewy....
sticks to the roof of your mouth....
.... an excellent write....
please, send him the bill....
this ain't no wash & wear!!!

sounds like a strawberry jam to me!
what a pickle you were in!
hehe
*wink*

i love it

it's crunchy!!

no peanut of a poem here...
this one's got the shell and the salt
fully flavored with delight!

er.... next time?
ever try crunchy peanut butter
on a banana....??? YUMMMM

just an idea... *grin*

i loved it....

and btw... there's no such thing as
JUST a woman....
very well done, my friend

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

2 posted 2001-04-03 08:36 PM

where's the jelly!!

Kathleen Blake

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee

JLR
Senior Member

since 2001-02-04

Posts 1785

3 posted 2001-04-03 08:37 PM

Chunky peanut butter is a bit more predictable than love...at least, you know where the nuts are!

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

4 posted 2001-04-03 09:24 PM

LOL @ JLR!!

Who knew that chunky peanut butter could be so hard to get out of???

Great poem. . . I have to echo doreen!!!

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Lone Wolf
Member Ascendant

since 2000-03-16

Posts 5842
Lansing, MI USA

5 posted 2001-04-03 10:16 PM

Sounds messy!! At least you know there are nuts in chunky peanut butter!! ROFL. Good one, Joyce!

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

bslicker

Member Elite

since 2000-12-04

Posts 2321
state of mind

6 posted 2001-04-04 12:22 PM

hmmmmmm,,, hmmmmmm good... sounds hmmmmm,,, hmmmmm good..
Bernie
a

a day keeps the world

'g

Bernie Slicker

Packratmike
Senior Member

since 2001-02-25

Posts 632
California, USA

7 posted 2001-04-04 12:23 PM

JAW....Very good...you did it! *g*
Great job.

Mike

thecraig
Member

since 2001-03-11

Posts 223

8 posted 2001-04-04 02:34 AM

You fell into a party. Nice discription.

Joyce Johnson

Member Rara Avis

since 2001-03-10

Posts 9912
Washington State

9 posted 2001-04-04 02:39 AM

Just proves it. Poetry is everywhere. Chunky peanut butter yet. I loved it. Joyce

PoeticKnight
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since 2000-01-20

Posts 1144
New Orleans, LA

10 posted 2001-04-04 10:42 AM

I like Peter Pan Creamy peanut butter the best!

RMW
Senior Member

since 2001-03-21

Posts 1424

11 posted 2001-04-04 05:47 PM

"Man does not live by bread alone....he must have peanut butter." Bob

PoeticKnight
Senior Member

since 2000-01-20

Posts 1144
New Orleans, LA

12 posted 2001-04-04 05:48 PM

Don't forget the jelly! *S*

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