An Autumn Evening.....for PoeticKnight

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Open Poetry #13

An Autumn Evening.....for PoeticKnight

1slick_lady
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since 2000-12-22

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standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2001-04-03 07:02 PM

An Autumn Evening.....for PoeticKnight

autumn evening, such a poetic night
brings back favorite memories to light
suttle crispness to the cooled wind
rearranged colors, exciting fall blend
ringed smoke from leaves burning
sets my heart on fire, starts yearning
harvest now is past the rise
a find in the garden, a nice surprise
days now become slower and shorter
we plan for winter, putting things in order
yes, autumn is a night poetic
has a special magic, if we let it
seasons come and seasons go
a favorite for a PoeticKnights flow

bslicker

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since 2000-12-04

Posts 2321
state of mind

1 posted 2001-04-03 07:06 PM

my, my were are in a writing mood tonight..
Nice write to PoeticKnights reply on your Paradise Mine Post.
Bernie
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a day keeps the world

'g

Bernie Slicker

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Interloper

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since 2000-11-06

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Deep in the heart

2 posted 2001-04-04 06:45 PM

This deserves another look. BTTT

Live for love. Without love, you don't live.

Sven

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since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

3 posted 2001-04-04 06:49 PM

wonderful words. . . it's nice when others can inspire us isn't it helen??

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Brad Majors

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since 2001-04-03

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Georgia

4 posted 2001-04-04 07:02 PM

Beautiful piece. I am sure Poetic Knight will love it as much as we have

Honeybee
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since 1999-12-26

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Ontario, CANADA

5 posted 2001-04-04 07:05 PM

Well penned, wonderful flow and rhyme~

Take care,
Melissa~

cruz
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since 2000-07-18

Posts 282
Dallas,Texas USA

6 posted 2001-04-05 11:07 PM

Very nice. Short but sweet. I liked the idea of favorite memories being brought back to light. This put me in an poetic mood. Thanks for the mood swing.

Elizabeth

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Minnesota

7 posted 2001-10-31 06:11 PM

Your autumn evening is lovely, Helen.

God bless America, my home sweet home.

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