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Embers_Before_God
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0 posted 2001-04-03 06:30 PM



An elbow of sun,
discernible from afar—
unforgettable!


Dance with me under the moon.  Touch my pale skin.  Devour me.  Love me.

[This message has been edited by Embers_Before_God (edited 04-03-2001).]

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1 posted 2001-04-03 06:59 PM


Beautiful image, very nice haiku.
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Member Rara Avis
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2 posted 2001-04-04 06:43 PM


Good work.  Let's see some more.

Live for love. Without love, you don't live.


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