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Brad Majors

Member Elite

since 2001-04-03

Posts 2647
Georgia

0 posted 2001-04-03 05:54 PM

                Masterfully
                   I die
                   Spitting chocolate
                   dipped
                   maggots
                   into rancid chicken soup
                   sexually gesturing
                   at picture of Betty Grabel
                   on the Bathroom wall
                   I lie
                   lie on
                   in and out
                   Running backwards
                   naked
                   wearing an old codpiece
                   covered in mold
                   falling
                   down
                   down
                   down
                   the broken spiral
                   staircase
                   stopping only for Brandy
                   and Wicked Ale
                   and so to door bell ring
                   I spring
                   to my mistress
                   sacred vixen
                   of naughtiness
                   and half baked sex pies
                   lie down!
                   lie in !
                   out!
                   Slashing off ugly toes
                   and I begin yet
                   my Journey to eternal bliss
                   in Mcdonald land
                   paying to see st ronald
                   take off his nose.
                   -forgive me mcheese-
                   for I have sinned
                   falling to sleep
                   in a puddle of grease

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

1 posted 2001-04-03 06:09 PM

I do hope I'm the first to welcome you to Passions! I am quite the hedonist myself!
So as ya probably know, I enjoyed this much!
Thanks for the company...

and? WELCOME!!!

Brad Majors

Member Elite

since 2001-04-03

Posts 2647
Georgia

2 posted 2001-04-03 06:13 PM

Thank you. Its pretty cool so far!

doreen peri
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since 1999-05-25

Posts 3812
Virginia

3 posted 2001-04-03 06:27 PM

quote:
and so to door bell ring
                   I spring
                   to my mistress
                   sacred vixen
                   of naughtiness
                   and half baked sex pies

loved that part, brad/dantheman..... and the ending?? LOL.... can't stop laughing... take off his nose? oh me oh my.... are you SURE y'wanna do that? rofl....

and hey, yeah, a great big welcome again from me.... glad to see you scrolled around the net and found us.... there are many here who'll very much enjoy your work, just as i always have....

PoeticaL
Member

since 2001-03-31

Posts 50

4 posted 2001-04-04 11:45 AM

lol you can change the name but the greatness remains. We're smart...us girls. You know that.

This one is great. Love the naked reference...but I'm that kinda girl. ha!

"I'm a junkyard full of false starts....Elliot Smith"

Brad Majors

Member Elite

since 2001-04-03

Posts 2647
Georgia

5 posted 2001-04-04 12:19 PM

You're welcome

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