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ParisGrl
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0 posted 2001-04-03 05:25 PM



Sitting here, I come to terms with the fact that you are no longer mine
I feel the hot tears sting my eyes
I miss you as my friend and more
The sound of your laugh, our late night talks, the softness of your caress
Although I have gone on and met other people and I know you have too
I can't shake the feeling that I still miss you

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Deep in the heart
1 posted 2001-04-03 05:26 PM


Why do I feel that he is the loser?

Well done.

Live for love. Without love, you don't live.


JLR
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2 posted 2001-04-03 05:39 PM


Laura---Your heart is so sweet, young and sincere.  You know I understand.  You have many good memories yet to make...embrace the old ones, hope for the new.  Wish I could make it all better.  But I can't even take care of myself.  I hate it when I'm brutally honest.    Your friend--RJ
(hopefully will be back soon)

Speak when you are angry--and you'll make the best speech you'll ever regret...Laurence J. Peter

ParisGrl
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3 posted 2001-04-03 09:14 PM


Interloper,

Thanks for reading.....and the compliment.

R.J.

Thank you my friend.  :-)  You are truly special to me.  You can take care of yourself.  Just take it one day at a time.  You'll be fine.  Trust me.

I'll ttys,
Laura

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