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Interloper
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Deep in the heart

0 posted 2001-04-03 04:43 PM


~*~
Twilight's last gleaming ...
is it just a verse we've learned
or fact of nature?
~*~

Live for love. Without love, you don't live.


© Copyright 2001 The Tall Texan aka Doctor Love - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-04-03 04:50 PM


Um....yes, I do believe so....

this is wonderful!

Mabel A. Dilley
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2 posted 2001-04-03 04:54 PM


I love the question, and must trust that verse is representative of reality.

"I am not now that which I have been."

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3 posted 2001-04-03 05:18 PM


this sounds familiar,  

Kathleen Blake

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee


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with you
4 posted 2001-04-07 01:18 PM


great question....like this    SEA
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5 posted 2001-04-08 10:35 PM


Sunshine ~ Thank you your highness.

Julian ~ Thanks for the read.  I do believe this is a first.

Irish Rose ~ Colleen, it's not from the old sod.

SEA ~ Got an answer?

Live for love. Without love, you don't live.


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6 posted 2001-04-08 11:39 PM


thought provoking

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7 posted 2001-04-09 09:02 AM


Interloper....you are too cute....and I am putting this in my library....
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