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Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

0 posted 2001-04-03 04:19 PM

pure twilight’s purple
pledging promises to come
dream’s arrival, sweet

Panne447
Member

since 2001-04-03

Posts 196
S.A. TX

1 posted 2001-04-03 04:39 PM

Wow, Sunshine, you brought that photo to life with this Senyru and I didn't need a picture- but am glad you sent it - it reinforced my mind's picture. I am glad the photos and music download slowly on my computer- gives me time to form my own image.
Panne

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

2 posted 2001-04-03 04:40 PM

Another gem ... you are a cornucopia of verse and I cherish the overflow I am able to enjoy.

Live for love. Without love, you don't live.

Lone Wolf
Member Ascendant

since 2000-03-16

Posts 5842
Lansing, MI USA

3 posted 2001-04-03 04:41 PM

Awesome senyru, Sunshine. The picture is stunning!!

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

Mabel A. Dilley
Senior Member

since 2001-03-17

Posts 859
Seattle, WA, USA

4 posted 2001-04-03 04:59 PM

Sunset tears at passions canvas leaving you unify its meaning. Excellent expression.

"I am not now that which I have been."

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

5 posted 2001-04-03 05:03 PM

this is very beautiful!

Kathleen Blake

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee

PoeticKnight
Senior Member

since 2000-01-20

Posts 1144
New Orleans, LA

6 posted 2001-04-03 05:45 PM

What a pretty little...senryu and picture too.

walker
Member Elite

since 2001-02-11

Posts 2240
Florida

7 posted 2001-04-03 07:34 PM

Enchanting!

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

8 posted 2001-04-03 08:38 PM

Beautiful..

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

9 posted 2001-04-04 09:00 PM

Karilea~

With soft purple ink
Lacing images softly
In dreams sweetly spun
Twirl of poetic penning
Leaving lavender traces

*You KNOW I LOVED it !
Tanka you !
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Honeybee
Member Ascendant

since 1999-12-26

Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA

10 posted 2001-04-04 09:03 PM

Such a beautiful, vivid senryu!

Loved it!~

Take care,
Melissa~

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