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the story |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA 
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I know that you're out there I've known since I heard that first story the story of two people hearts joined in life and in love happy and loving peaceful and touching walking through life together I've been looking for you since that day trying to find you in the story of my life the pages would unfold introductions were written chapters outlined and the story began the only thing is that they didn't have happy endings so, I would try to begin again to write that one story that would never end it all began when I heard the story and when I find you it will never end -------------------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Mabel A. Dilley Senior Member
since 2001-03-17
Posts 859Seattle, WA, USA |
Softly, gently I whisper: I know she will find you. "I am not now that which I have been." |
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inot2B Member Elite
since 2000-09-18
Posts 2205Arkansas |
It will be written in stone the world can read of his love and all will know that our Sven will never again be alone. I know it will be a "Best Seller"  |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I know of two who lived this story and now live it on another realm it does happen, indeed, it does... |
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Just A Woman Senior Member
since 2001-03-10
Posts 507 |
"Woo hoo! I'm over here!!!" *twinkling grin* Ahhhhhhh, sweet everlasting love. Just beautiful, Sven. 
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Panne447 Member
since 2001-04-03
Posts 196S.A. TX |
Looks like you got one offer Sven. Nice thoughts. Panne |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
*sigh* this was a good one, Sven. What to do when you can begin a enrapturing story but can't finish it? I was never good at the finish either unless I fooled myself into it. still d-i-s-c-o-n-n-e-c-t-e-d |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Very well written expression of love here, Sven...applause! jwesley |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
This is sooooooo romantic, an immortal love, I love it! A quarter of a century must pass, for the writer to understand what and why he writes. |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Oh, I'm so glad I didn't miss this one. It sounds like Disney left his mark on the emotions of some men, too! And I thought it was just us overemotional women May you find happily ever after, and soon. Sandra |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Ok, this is fabulous - what an "ending" Kathleen Blake |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Julian, I hope that you're right. . . thank you my friend. . . inot2B, thank you so much. . . I'll save you an autographed copy. . . Sunshine, I wonder if I know them as well. . . and I know that it does happen. . . thank you my friend. . . Just a Woman, HI!! *waves back*. . . . . . thank you so much. . .Panne, yes. . . it does look that way doesn't it?? LOL. . . thank you my friend. . . Temptress, you could always go back for another draft. . . sometimes, we have to re-write. . . thank you. . . James, thank you, glad that you enjoyed. . . walker, thank you. . . is there any other kind?? Sandra, I wish the same for you my friend. . . and don't be fooled. . . there are plenty of us emotional me around!! Kathleen, ok. . . I'm glad that you liked. . . ----------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
Your storywriting is a stirring metaphor for love, Sven. I've found that in some of the most engaging stories, one never knows what the next chapter might bring. I hope it brings you a happily ever after, my friend. Thanks for this. Claire Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau |
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Greeneyes 
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
she is indeed out there, your paths will cross and the rest will be written in the stars, and on the sands of time.... be well and hugs my friend....Lauren~ *** "Within you I lose myself |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Great work, my friend... Regards to you Sir Sven, Sudhir |
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KokoStewartKoomoa Senior Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 580Waikiki, Hawaii |
this was an interesting and alluring write. Your wonderfull romantic heart is showing! smiles, Aloha with warmest regards, Koko Please Visit my new web-page http://www.koko-stewart-koomoa.cityslide.com/contents/contents.cfm/190111 [This message has been edited by KokoStewartKoomoa (edited 04-04-2001).] |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
You will find her, and she will find you! And she will be the luckiest women alive, remember God has already written the story before time began. Well expressed, my friend. You'll find your soulmate soon - I'm rooting for ya  Take care, Melissa~ [This message has been edited by Melissa Honeybee (edited 04-04-2001).] |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
It happens, and thank God it does!!!! The faith of knowing it does happen is enough to keep us hopeful and trying!! Beautiful Sven. *War produces one thing - Cemetaries. And in cemetaries there are no enemies!* |
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Brad Majors
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
Nicely written. I believe in happy ending so I wish all the best for the end to this story |
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Mother_Earth Senior Member
since 2000-11-20
Posts 13701/2 year Texas & 1/2 year Michigan |
Sven, I think you just misplaced that chapter. Keep looking and always be ready 'cuz you never know when they sneek back into your life. She may just be lost and is looking for you too. Hugs, ME |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Claire, thank you my friend. . . I am honored by your words. . . and I hope that the next chapter is indeed better. . . thank you. . . Lauren, thank you for those hugs. . . I hope that you're right. . . Sudhir my friend, thank you. . . Koko, aloha my friend. . . and thank you. . . Melissa, thank you for being on my side. . . and you know that I'm rooting for you too!!! Isis, my friend. . . indeed it is. . .it's what keeps us from giving up. . . thank you my friend. . . Brad, (I love your name btw!! LOL). . . thank you. . . and thank you for reading. . . ME. . . no, this chapter is over. . . but hopefully there will be another one someday. . .thank you. . . -------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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