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Sunshine
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Listening to every heart

0 posted 2001-04-03 11:25 AM


This was my third post here at Passions...guess what?  It is STILL true....



If you are reading this then you know
that "thing" in you, what makes you "go"
and you'll sense in kind what's in your heart
what I've known all along, what sets you apart.

God gives us miracles every day
but to look for them, that takes a special way
of seeing past the ordinary, just look into your eyes
you'll see you are an Angel, hidden in disguise.

What? you say, Certainly not me!
Yes, your friends, they all agree!
You're the angel on earth, and you impart
a loving and giving to each friend's heart.

You didn't know it, but it is true
The Angel I see daily is YOU.



© Copyright 2001 Karilea Rilling Jungel - All Rights Reserved
JLR
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1 posted 2001-04-03 11:35 AM


Yeah, but you don't have to live with me!  Thanks...this was so sweet.
Sudhir Iyer
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2 posted 2001-04-03 11:40 AM


Yes, of course....

wonderful poetry, my friend...

Regards to you, Karilea,
Sudhir

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3 posted 2001-04-03 01:05 PM


yes, it is. . .  

wonderful my friend. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Mabel A. Dilley
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4 posted 2001-04-03 01:08 PM


So nice to look upon the Angel that is you.
Thank you for the poem.

"I am not now that which I have been."

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5 posted 2001-04-03 01:42 PM


Karilea,

I've known this truth you speak so eloquently about, for years.  Thank you for this.


Michael

Proust-
"Love is space and time measured by the heart"

Panne447
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6 posted 2001-04-03 01:45 PM


Sunshine. Nice and true.
Panne

Rosebud1229
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7 posted 2001-04-03 01:55 PM


your the angel, beautiful!
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8 posted 2001-04-04 03:47 PM


The definition of Angel is "messenger."  Therefore, dear Karilea, you are the angel.

And, pray, keep bringing the words strung together, as only you can do, to form the message.


And I will read ... and enjoy ... and dream.

Live for love. Without love, you don't live.


Lone Wolf
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9 posted 2001-04-04 03:51 PM


I see the Angel who wrote this one.  Very nice, Sunshine.  

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

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10 posted 2001-04-04 04:51 PM


Gosh, I can't remember my third post!  This is wonderful.
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