Open Poetry #13 |
Doorways |
Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Doorways ~*Marge Tindal*~ You are a loving friend of that there is no doubt The doorway to my IN when others would walk OUT A bright red carpet of WELCOME not the doormat beneath your feet One who knows just when to ENTER when others might retreat The sure and steady ringing repeatedly announcing your arrival You are the friend I count most on my means of sure survival The revolving doorway of friendship turns me back to you Long after mere visitors are gone you remain a friend so true ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
And my door will always be open for you sweet Margie After reading this, I said to myself, "yes, this is exactly what I think of Marge!" Well written from your tender big ole heart!~ Love n' hugs, Melissa~ |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Well I sure don't plan on exiting your revolving door, so get that coffee pot going Marge...as I will always walk through the door for a visit, and a little java jive girl! I may be a lot of things, but fleeting never! I loved this and was that ever a cute picture you picked too. (big on visuals) Lovely package, and I hope your forever friend loves it as much as I did too. [This message has been edited by Mysteria (edited 04-03-2001).] |
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Mabel A. Dilley Senior Member
since 2001-03-17
Posts 859Seattle, WA, USA |
Very apt description of true friendship - a somewhat remarkable occurance given our times. "I am not now that which I have been." |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
And what a lovely friend you must be. Joyce |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
You are a gem of a friend Marge... fantastic poetry... Regards, Sudhir |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Melissa~ You doll ! Come on in ! This heart is always open ! Mysteria~ A good friend and a hot cup of coffee ... what more could we ask of life ? (Well ... maybe cream for our coffee.) Thanks, gal. Julian~ True friendship is really a treasure. It's up to each of us to keep it shining. Thank you for the thoughtful reply. Joyce~ Being a true friend is the easiest thing God has ever asked of me. Open door - open heart - open arms. Thank you for the reply. Sudhir~ Easy to be so with friends like yourself. Take care this day ... you are friend. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
This is the kind of friend so few are and so many need...lovely thoughts here Miss Marge and if you dont mind I have a friend Id love to send this to |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Well, I'll come through that door But that's just for a start I won't be home until I pass The doorway to your heart! |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Marge~ Of all the doors, and doorways....to be opened, most beautiful and special....indeed friendship should always be that way....expressed lovely as you do.... Lauren~ *** "Within you I lose myself |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Knock, Knock, Knock......... |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
the door to my heart is propped open to enter there is no fee and when a harsh wind should force it shut in your friendship you hold the key -vlraynes Marge- This one is just so YOU... I LOVE IT!!! I sure do miss you...hope to be around more soon... love you, -vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes [This message has been edited by vlraynes (edited 04-04-2001).] |
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KokoStewartKoomoa Senior Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 580Waikiki, Hawaii |
You and your muse are a pure delight to know. I always enjoy your poems as many do. Grat talent! I visityour webpage and enjoyed it very much Aloha with warmest regards, Koko |
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2dalimit Member Elite
since 2000-02-08
Posts 2228Mississippi coast |
Nice. True friends will always be at your door. Melton |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Well, I hope you're happy......you made me cry this morning........I absolutely loved this Marge.....doing that soul- heart touchy thing again.......... SEA |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I'm ringing your bell but you're not home so I'll leave a note in case you phone then I'll come over for a cup of tea and I'll bring friends... just wait and see! |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Standing on the back door steps Waiting for my turn I've been knocking now for hours And my poor knuckles burn! Love this, Marge! *S* (Whatcha mean the line is at the FRONT door? *G*) |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
This piece makes me think it may be a secular way of describing Jesus ... the ultimate friend. So very well done, no matter the object of your work. Live for love. Without love, you don't live. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Paula~ Please do share ... I'm honored and greatly pleased. Thank you. Balladeer~ You are a sweetie ! You know this heart is always open ... COME ON IN ~ GreenEyes~ Thanks, gal. Friends are forever n' ever ... Martie~ LOL ! You have your own key ... so quit that pounding, SIS ! Vicky~ You should come knocking more often .. Sweet friend ... I thank you. KoKo~ Thank you so much for browsing the web pages of my heart. *Hugs* Melton~ That would be my fondest wish. Thank you. SEA~ I am happy knowing you are as much of a 'softie' as me ! LOL ! Love ya' Karilea~ Always home for you, my friend. *Hugs* SuthernGal~ Backdoor friends are special ! Interloper~ Thank for looking at this in several ways. Enjoyed your perspectives. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Margie girl, can I come in love? Dear heart you know you can waltz in and out of my door anytime you like. Absolutely wonderful writing from you now why can't I have you here right by my side, you would have no trouble in keeping those wretched docs in order. You know of course that I LOVE THIS always you write so beautifully. Love and warm stuff my talented and superior poetic sister Mushy take care Take back the hope you gave,- I claim |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Marsha~ You are WONDERFUL for my attitude ! I'd have those doctors in shape in no time flat ! Need me ... you call ... STAT ! I'll help anytime and between the two of us - TRAUMA-TEAM will take on a whole new meaning ! ! Be good girlie ... Love ya' ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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