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Unworthy of your love
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Unworthy of your love |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace 
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Unworthy of your love unworthy of your love looking for a step above nothing I did was right silence echoed through the night all I did to please dismissed with such great ease no I don't wear an angel's face lips still have the same taste have better manners than most yet treated me like a ghost maybe my sense of style lack of a sparkling smile whatever it was....I was never enough preferred those that were fluff now I am no longer near still you can't see WHY clear |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Whew! - powerful, excellent rage of flow, tale and rhyme, well penned!~ Take care, Melissa~ |
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Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597 |
Hey, Lady, I like this change is style. Works well here. Hope all is well, relatively, of course. Kraw' /:-}== |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
If you did all you could, it is his loss. The right one will make you feel worthy and not demand anything in return. He's out there! All writing comes |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
You look like an angel by the sea!!! Kathleen Blake |
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PoeticKnight Senior Member
since 2000-01-20
Posts 1144New Orleans, LA |
His loss indeed. You stated your case clearly...he was a fool. *S* |
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Rosebud1229 Senior Member
since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813North Carolina |
sometimes it is the ones that love the most that happen to meet someone that wants to take, take, take, and not give. This is when this unworthiness seeps into us. excellent poem |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
had to read again, I loved the theme so much. |
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