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I Told My Heart.......

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WhtDove
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0 posted 04-02-2001 10:02 PM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

I Told My Heart...




I told my heart to tell you
But it could not explain
The feeling that it holds
The love that it retains

It just could not express
The words too hard to find
To make you understand
What’s going through my mind

To let you know your friendship
Has meant the world to me
A special friend and angel
I’m sure God will agree

So how can I let you know
About the things we’ve shared
The times we laughed so hard
The tears that show you cared

How precious is each moment
That I have shared with you
If only my heart’d tell you
The things I wish you knew

I told my heart to tell you
But it could not explain
The feeling that it holds
The love that it retains



[This message has been edited by WhtDove (edited 04-02-2001).]

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Red-uni
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1 posted 04-02-2001 10:04 PM       View Profile for Red-uni   Email Red-uni   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Red-uni's Home Page   View IP for Red-uni

Very nicely said.
Red  
Honeybee
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2 posted 04-02-2001 10:04 PM       View Profile for Honeybee   Email Honeybee   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Honeybee


Oh Rebecca I love this, what a truly beautiful tribute to friends!~  

Take care,
Melissa~
jwesley
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3 posted 04-02-2001 10:07 PM       View Profile for jwesley   Email jwesley   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for jwesley

Wonderfully done my friend...beautiful!!

jwesley
Lone Wolf
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4 posted 04-02-2001 10:11 PM       View Profile for Lone Wolf   Email Lone Wolf   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lone Wolf

Friendship is a blessing from Him.  So well put, White Dove.  I enjoyed this much!  

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

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5 posted 04-02-2001 10:12 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

Excellent writing, dovey  
Joyce Johnson
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6 posted 04-02-2001 10:13 PM       View Profile for Joyce Johnson   Email Joyce Johnson   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Joyce Johnson

Did you send this to a friend on a card?  You should.  Joyce
WhtDove
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7 posted 04-02-2001 10:17 PM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

My my, I'm shocked here, I was in doing an edit and low and behold. LOL

Red-Uni thanks so much.

Melissa thank you for your wonderful comment. It was written for friends.  

Much thanks jwesley.   I appreciate it much.


Lone Wolf I'm touched you liked it so.  

Thanks Deer, it was to a special person, a red hot pepper.  


Joyce I couldn't get the picture up until now, but I put all in a word document and sent it. I sure did! Thank you Joyce!
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8 posted 04-02-2001 10:24 PM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

I really like this Becky!!!
Dark Angel
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9 posted 04-02-2001 11:02 PM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

This is a beautifully written tribute Angel.

I say give it to your friend dear.

hugs

Maree
WhtDove
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10 posted 04-03-2001 09:22 AM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

Devine and Angel, I have given it.  
To all my friends.    Thanks everyone!
sandgrain
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11 posted 04-03-2001 05:48 PM       View Profile for sandgrain   Email sandgrain   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for sandgrain

Beautiful!  Your words so well expressed that words cannot express your deep feelings.  This would be a great one for a card, as I'm sure many relate to it.
Love,  Mom
walker
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12 posted 04-03-2001 07:32 PM       View Profile for walker   Email walker   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for walker

Lovely expression of love!

A quarter of a century must pass, for the writer to understand what and why he writes.

Just A Woman
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13 posted 04-03-2001 07:36 PM       View Profile for Just A Woman   Email Just A Woman   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Just A Woman

Completely beautiful.  I often find myself feeling just this way.  



"I can't remember if I'm the good twin or the evil one."

Irish Rose
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14 posted 04-03-2001 08:38 PM       View Profile for Irish Rose   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Irish Rose

White Dove, good to see you and I'm glad I'm not the only one who speaks to her heart!
Gentle Spirit
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15 posted 04-03-2001 08:50 PM       View Profile for Gentle Spirit   Email Gentle Spirit   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Gentle Spirit

Dove, this is beautiful.....Very sincere.  

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

WhtDove
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Thanks Mom, I will consider Sharon's advice on putting it on my site as a card to send out.  

Thanks Walker, glad you enjoyed.

Just A Women, I'm glad you could relate. Sometimes it's just hard to find the words.   Thank you!

Thanks much Irish Rose.  

Gentle Spirit I'm glad you liked it. Thank you.  
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17 posted 04-04-2001 11:38 AM       View Profile for suthern   Email suthern   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for suthern

I think your heart explained very well, Dovey. *S* This is a beautiful expression of what a friendship means to you. Well done!
jfreak
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18 posted 04-04-2001 11:50 AM       View Profile for jfreak   Email jfreak   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for jfreak

Becca,

Your heart may not have been able to find the words, but obviously your brain did.  This is an outstanding poem...and YES!!!!  I am back...been too long.  I am like that distant cousin that everybody loves, but lives too far away, so you only get to see him only on certain times.  LOL  Wouldn't you agree.  Well maybe not...LOL...not too sure if anyone here loves me at all...LOL  Anyway...OUTSTANDING poem.

J~
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19 posted 04-04-2001 02:13 PM       View Profile for Elizabeth   Email Elizabeth   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Elizabeth's Home Page   View IP for Elizabeth

I think that your heart has told them just fine!
Sunshine
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20 posted 04-04-2001 02:23 PM       View Profile for Sunshine   Email Sunshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Sunshine's Home Page   View IP for Sunshine

'Becca, a beautiful write, thank you for sharing this with us all...
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21 posted 04-04-2001 02:27 PM       View Profile for Interloper   Email Interloper   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Interloper

Now you have told my heart ...

Well done.

Live for love. Without love, you don't live.

Sven
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22 posted 04-04-2001 07:36 PM       View Profile for Sven   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sven

you know that I love this one Dove. . . it's perfect. . .  

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

WhtDove
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Thanks Suthern! There's just some things that aren't easy to express. Hugs to ya doll.

Brandon!!!! I'd agree, yes I would. LOL
Where ya been? Far too long! I love ya!    Thanks for poppin in here to see me. Miss ya, and hope to talk with ya soon!!

Thank you Elizabeth, I sure tried.  

Sunshine it was for a beautiful person.  
Thanks.

Interloper, that makes me happy   Thank you.

Sven thanks so very much!

Many thanks to each and everyone of you.
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24 posted 02-07-2005 10:47 AM       View Profile for passing shadows   Email passing shadows   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for passing shadows

somehow I think he knew
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