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PoeticaL
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since 2001-03-31
Posts 50


0 posted 2001-04-02 09:24 PM


Unknown I know
But wait what do you know
About what I already know
It’s not facts of vision
But the lack of division
That time has not dealt
Despite being victim
To the invisible feelings
I have so surely felt

I have come to share
With little or no fear
The things I most revere
And though I haven’t
Clues to visualize the years
They are still something
I hold carefully so near
A perfect memory
Without a rip or tear

Learn I have
Learned by whole not half
That some things come to be
Valuable more than importantly
Meaning you and I have never seen
The scene of what makes a dream
And I have not met nor do I get
The way that you matter so even yet

Go figure the facts of all of that
And I’ll let you borrow my thinking hat
The cap of this cat where I have always sat
The Dr. Suess of my muse and self abuse
The friendship that I hope I never lose
Thanks for you, thank you for giving me
Something much better in life to choose
Someone I can feel even though I cannot see


"I'm a junkyard full of false starts....Elliot Smith"

© Copyright 2001 Kristy - All Rights Reserved
Lone Wolf
Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842
Lansing, MI USA
1 posted 2001-04-02 09:40 PM


There is nothing like knowing someone is always there for you no matter what.  Very well said.  

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

Irish Rose
Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263

2 posted 2001-04-03 06:17 AM


this one deserves a bump!

Kathleen Blake

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee


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