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Packratmike
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0 posted 2001-04-02 05:11 PM


Possibly a rictameter.....thought I'd try it.  Thanks to Marina for introducing me to this style.

truly
this man must stand
alone at times sorting
dirty laundry of past mistakes...
a forgotten promise lost to smaller
unimportant things is a crime
no less brutal than the
rape of a heart
truly



[This message has been edited by Packratmike (edited 04-02-2001).]

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Lone Wolf
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1 posted 2001-04-02 05:17 PM


Very profound observation, Mike.  Enjoyed it.  

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

Waseem Cheema
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2 posted 2001-04-02 05:36 PM


It is a great idea..............thanx and carry on
Panne415
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3 posted 2001-04-02 06:59 PM


Mike, Beautiful. And looks like it fills the bill to me from what I read of the description of this form.  Panne

Packratmike
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4 posted 2001-04-02 09:28 PM


Lone Wolf, Waseem & Panne.....thank you for commenting.  I suppose everyone at one time or another has broken a promise either inadvertantly or by effort.  Guess I was just spanking my own rear-end here.

Mike

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Marge Tindal
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5 posted 2001-04-03 12:54 PM


PackRatMike~
Very nicely done -
and a subtle message to boot !
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Packratmike
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6 posted 2001-04-03 02:01 AM


Thank you Marge.
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