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Daniel J D
Senior Member

since 2000-10-01

Posts 1471
Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia

0 posted 2001-04-02 12:24 PM

Mirrored Images

In the forest of my cloudy mind
Shadows which I cannot comprehend
I see yesterday's painful nightmare
Falling dignity, landing who knows where

Circling the circumference of my imagination
Reaching for mirrored images
All I can find is an unreachable horizon
The closer I get the further pain engages

I maintain my balance, closing my eyes
Hope within asserts the will of comfort
The search gains momentum through flashes
Of compounded memoirs, dreams so short

The heat of my trembling heart creating waves
Images of trouble, Images of childhood naives
Powerful forces of loneliness, threatening menaces
Engaging tumultuous regurgitations of lost embraces

Peaceful flows of thoughts lost in time's tranquility
Clouding the inpenetrable contours of my conciousness
Somehow managing an alternative and relentless
Desire to accept the innevitable balance of fragility

Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love
(Daniel J D)

Lone Wolf
Member Ascendant

since 2000-03-16

Posts 5842
Lansing, MI USA

1 posted 2001-04-02 12:35 PM

Daniel,

Life is very fragile indeed. Wonderful expression of emotion here. They seem to flow before me like a rollercoaster. The ups and downs of life are represented well.

Lone Wolf

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

2 posted 2001-04-02 04:08 AM

This is amazing, Daniel

Kathleen Blake

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee

snowpants
Member Elite

since 2000-09-16

Posts 2061
KS

3 posted 2001-04-03 09:55 PM

'In the forest of my cloudy mind
Shadows which I cannot comprehend
I see yesterday's painful nightmare
Falling dignity, landing who knows where

Circling the circumference of my imagination
Reaching for mirrored images
All I can find is an unreachable horizon
The closer I get the further pain engages'

Excellent imagery, Daniel...wonderfully written, m'friend!

sp

to be with you...
I've tried to hide my passion,
but it's just no use...
piece by piece I lose it
when you walk into the room...

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