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S Arthur Grey
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woven by a poet's loom

0 posted 2001-04-01 09:46 PM


Act Too

I love
you love me too
we said when we were new
but now the proof is in I do
act too.


S Arthur

Whose Night is this, Mine or the Moon's?
J.E.James

[This message has been edited by S Arthur Grey (edited 04-02-2001).]

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1slick_lady
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1 posted 2001-04-02 02:46 AM


s........

   act three

do you love by degree
thought "i do" was unconditionally
does time rust the new
when it is suppose to be the glue
your move........act too

                  helen

bslicker
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2 posted 2001-04-02 05:46 AM


opps had to edit act 4


This response is to both, i believe in the act 2... and i alread;y have been in the proof.
now for the forward reponse.
i love by degree and it is unconditional
and you can beleive that it is beyond glue, and i yesterday did make the move...
Now i believe i can not make it past this move..
your move now.///////
Bernie
a     a day keeps the world    "g


Bernie Slicker


[This message has been edited by bslicker (edited 04-02-2001).]

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