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Marge Tindal
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0 posted 2001-04-01 07:55 PM



~Written On The Wind~
~*Marge Tindal*~

For it is written on the wind
that you should come my way
Blowing in as a forever friend
coming home to stay
~*~
Holding forever in our hearts
seeking to remain
friends from a long-ago time
yet always the same
~*~
I will watch the wind and wait
until the gentle breezes of you
caress my face with familiar trace
then I'll know it's true
~*~
You have come home to this heart
where you always will belong
Sharing heartfelt memories
lending my heart a song


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Denise
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1 posted 2001-04-01 08:08 PM


Forever friends are the best kind! This is beautiful, Marge!

Love ya
Denise

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2 posted 2001-04-01 08:14 PM


~Marge,...'written on the wind' is so nice to me. I think the wind holds lots, and shares with us it's all. Thank YOU for sharing this sweet write. *Peace you.
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3 posted 2001-04-01 08:18 PM


Denise~
My ~Warrior~ gets the nod of credit for this one-
He sent me an e-mail and closed with -
Catch you on the next gentle breeze~
Poof ! Inspiration ... isn't it wonderful to
have forever friends ?
Count yourself on board ! !

SpitFire~
I agree ... and a homeward wind is such a welcome breeze.
Thanks, love.
~*Marge*~


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4 posted 2001-04-01 09:15 PM


Lovely!  I shall like to set sail with the crew of "forever friends", maybe I can be the cook?  Catch you on the next tide, Captain Marge!
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5 posted 2001-04-01 09:49 PM


Mysteria~
Aye, Matey !
'Tis a'sailing we will go !
And can ya' cook lassie ?
Well .... come on board !
This friendship is set to sail !
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com


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6 posted 2001-04-01 09:57 PM


What Denise said!  

Love this.

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7 posted 2001-04-01 10:04 PM


And what an inspiration he must be to incite such lovely words from you[This message has been edited by Paula Finn (edited 04-01-2001).]
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8 posted 2001-04-01 10:04 PM


Lovely you, exsquisite poem.  

We're sorry..this heart has been d-i-s-c-o-n-n-e-c-t-e-d. Should you like to hold the line we'll be glad to reconnect you..

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9 posted 2001-04-01 10:09 PM


As always, your poetry is beautiful and sprinkled with wisdom.  Joyce
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10 posted 2001-04-01 10:41 PM


Elizabeth~
Yeah !
Forever-Friends ... me too !

Paula~
Yes ... a true inspiration.
Thanks, Hon.

Temptress~
Thank you ... it's totally inspired.

Joyce~
I appreciate that.
Thanks so much.
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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11 posted 2001-04-02 09:55 AM


oooooooooooohhhhhhhhhh *S*... I have one of those! *S* Makes breath worth breathing, doesn't it? *S* Great work, Marge... any forever friend of yours is a lucky person! *S*
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12 posted 2001-04-02 11:57 AM


Beautiful, BRAVO!!! Hope you don't mind my saying so.

Excellent rhythm, flow, tightness, IMHO and the message...***SUPERB***

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13 posted 2001-04-02 07:35 PM


Oh, SuthernGal~
The bestest friends are the forever friends.

Friends who step into our hearts - and not on them ...
are cherished beyond measure.

And though they may be apart from us ...
they blow as gently through our thoughts
as if they were right beside us.
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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