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Early Dawn
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Early Dawn |
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Mabel A. Dilley Senior Member
since 2001-03-17
Posts 859Seattle, WA, USA |
 The sun rises high enough to warm the sky lifting from storm, I rise to make four prayers of thanksgiving for this struggling day, for this good free earth, for all brothers and sisters, for the rich blood that runs through me in a great circle back into this good free earth. "I am not now that which I have been." |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
and the sky whispers back. . . wonderful Julian. . . ------------------------------------------------------ To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoy  |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Julian~ This is such a serene piece - I love the circles of life that bring us together.  Lovely thoughts. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Well I will just put my "John Henry" here to let you know, I loved it! |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Julian, Fabulous expression here!! The circle is endless and will continue fro ages. Well done! Lone Wolf Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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Mabel A. Dilley Senior Member
since 2001-03-17
Posts 859Seattle, WA, USA |
Thank each of you for enjoying the simplistic descriptions found within the circle of life, its beauty and its unspoken languages. Shalom "I am not now that which I have been." |
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Red-uni Member
since 2000-07-30
Posts 192Georgia, USA |
I am posting a reply late, have not been on line a lot lately. Loved it. Red |
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Mabel A. Dilley Senior Member
since 2001-03-17
Posts 859Seattle, WA, USA |
Your continued interest in this poem, is most appreciated. I thank you for your time. Shalom "I am not now that which I have been." |
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KokoStewartKoomoa Senior Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 580Waikiki, Hawaii |
wonderfully done! too early for me tho Aloha with warmest regards, Koko |
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