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carolinehill
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since 2000-12-21
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0 posted 2001-04-01 12:26 PM


bieng young
and trying to create an awful soul
          in the gentle heat
          in summer

A world full of previews, suggestions
(administrative edit)
tests and initiations
and games

[This message has been edited by Nan (edited 04-02-2001).]

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Sven
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1 posted 2001-04-02 08:03 PM


yep. . . I know what this is like. . . how the heck are you supposed to do this???

great poem. . .

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Lone Wolf
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since 2000-03-16
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2 posted 2001-04-02 09:06 PM


It's not an easy thing to do, but you'll grow into it in time.

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

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