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RMW
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0 posted 2001-04-01 11:48 AM


(Just a note to clarify and express agreement Meadowmuse)

The Us Within (originally "Just Friends")

To choose a word that rhymes with "must"
Suggests of course the very worst
Unless the two begin to trust
The beauty self-contained in "just".

Claire....thanks again for the discussion...and inspiration....what fun.  Bob

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Meadowmuse
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1 posted 2001-04-01 03:29 PM


What fun, indeed, Bob. We "must" do this again sometime. (o:

Thanks,
Claire

Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau


Mabel A. Dilley
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2 posted 2001-04-01 06:03 PM


I liked the message, although subtle.

"I am not now that which I have been."

Paula Finn
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3 posted 2001-04-02 01:30 AM


I really like the message this sends
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4 posted 2001-04-02 01:46 AM


I think I've missed something here, but still a good message.  Joyce
Decaflame
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5 posted 2001-05-15 09:38 AM


What Joyce lost, I believe I found...well done!
VAS
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6 posted 2001-05-16 10:29 AM


VEry nice, Bob!  As long as there's trust and acts are just the friendship will not rust.
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7 posted 2001-05-16 10:32 AM


this brought a smile and to see something meadow inspired even o yuh
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