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Cavorting in Profundity
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Cavorting in Profundity |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Rewrite Cavorting in profundity My face is old. My hands are cold. Yet I'm dreaming fecundity. I'm standing on the rim of bold, Cavorting with profundity. Churning with the ocean's churn, Banding with the foaming bands, Turning with each wave in turn, Shifting with each grain of sand. Sailing into thoughts sublime Yielding to its warp and port Drifting in and out of time On a dreamer's Argonaut. Over whelmed in sense and glow Flowing with this driving store Each blast of brine like salty snow Discloses, a celestial door. It's here I fly a butterfly High within a dreamers high. |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Sy, what a very fertile imagination you have. Well written and I like the metre change from first to second verse...or is that my accent showing  write on Kethry Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Sailing into thoughts sublime Yielding to its warp and port Drifting in and out of time On a dreamer's Argonaut. Over whelmed in sense and glow Flowing with this driving store Each blast of brine like salty snow Discloses, a celestial door. It's here I fly a butterfly High within a dreamers high. =============================== have ya ever heard a butterfly *sigh* ya have now  *winkiewinkie*    "Yet I'm dreaming fecundity. Cavorting with profundity." Youre so cool ... and you and Randy are co cute when ya cavort |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I remember this one, sy---and it still gives me that little etherical lift--you sure do write FEELINGS--you always manage to provoke an emotion in me. Just wonderful! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Kethry, Always enjoy your comments, thanks. JM, You send the pertiest butterflies. Randy just asked one for a date. Can you imagine a Dragon and a butterfly. That's one for Disney Winkiewinkie Stinky Sunshine, Well I think your worth provoking. *L* |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Serenity, Forgive me I got my S's mixed up but I meant what I said. *L* |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Yes ... I can ... and me thinks they make a lovely couple *winkiewinkie*   *kisskiss* |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Lookie ... a couple of me gator-girls brought Randy home.... see.. they made him put on his saddle and they got him on a short leash(chain) ROFL me thinks Randy is all smoke and no fire when he falls for a gatorgirl LOL the question is... can he handle a butterfly *winkiewinkie*   |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Well, since Janet Marie rewarded you with beautiful graphics instead of berating you for your "old" comments, I'll have to pick up the slack... and you know I'm not so gentle. *G* SMAAAAAAAAAAAAAAACCCCKKKKKK! *G* (Of course, if you want to consider that a prolonged smooch instead of a slap, it's okay by me! LOL) I enjoyed this one a lot, Seymour... keep cavorting! *G* |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Surhern, Cavorting has it's good points, I think I remember what you do when you cavort. LOL As for the smacks I'll take the prolonged ones. *L* JM, So help me you have spoiled Randy rotten. All he does is blow smoke rings for the butterflies to fly through. And tries to land on flowers and flattens them out. He is a comic oaf but he is having fun. Winkiewinkie. |
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