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Until You
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Until You |
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Tara Simms Senior Member
since 1999-08-12
Posts 1244Honea Path, SC USA 
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Until You You painted dreams On canvas of night, Scattered stars in my eyes Until Once again, I believed in magic The words you spun Like liquid gold Enveloped me in a fantasy Where I could love without reserve, Trust without fear I was drawn to you ~Spellbound~ Powerless to fight my fate Your kiss— So soft and sudden Broke my reverie And reality came crashing in In that moment ~I knew~ You are my destiny |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Tara~ Lovely thoughts. So good to see you. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597 |
"powerless . . . my reverie . . . my destiny." Powerful poem, Tara. /:-}== |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Loved this my friend... jwesley |
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biggestal New Member
since 2001-03-29
Posts 5rafford........scotland |
i like to see such economical use of language........using few words to say so much..........deftly done........... |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
hi Tara. . .  you know that I love this one. . . it's wonderful. . . ------------------------------------------------------ To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoy |
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Tara Simms Senior Member
since 1999-08-12
Posts 1244Honea Path, SC USA |
Thanks for taking the time to reply to my poem, everyone! Sven, thank you, my friend. You know I am happier than ever before. Marge, I may not get here often, but I still think of it as "home". krawdad, thank you...those are my favorite phrases as well. [This message has been edited by Tara Simms (edited 04-02-2001).] |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Tara~ this is SO beautiful!! This made me smile SEA |
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Bec Member
since 2001-02-23
Posts 475Canberra |
This is so true... It's such a simple, yet powerful poem. I could see myself in it. Bec |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Tara, nice to see you again, and to hear you are happy now, what a bonus! This is a beautiful poem. I am so happy for you. Sandra |
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Tara Simms Senior Member
since 1999-08-12
Posts 1244Honea Path, SC USA |
SEA, thank you for reading. I love your work and value your comments. Bec, I'm glad you enjoyed the read. Catalinamoon, yes, I'm quite happy and busy planning a wedding for August! |
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