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Pennys And Apples
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Pennys And Apples |
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Mother_Earth Senior Member
since 2000-11-20
Posts 13701/2 year Texas & 1/2 year Michigan |
Don't know how but that is a bad penny that turned up If a penny can be bad how is it we put a penny in a bride's shoe for luck One bad apple can spoil the whole barrel, they say But, an apple a day can keep the doctor away One day bad then one day good Nothing is always.... that's understood I know I find it hard not to judge Sometimes all in the name of love Apples and pennys, good and bad To judge or love or count the blessings I have |
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JamesBowie Member
since 2000-11-25
Posts 252big old Bangor Maine up by the shack |
this is interesting but I am cunfused by the flow- I know I don't always flow, but how is this to be read. |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
MotherEarth~ Now who could resist a title like that ? Not me .... Enjoyed !  ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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JamesBowie Member
since 2000-11-25
Posts 252big old Bangor Maine up by the shack |
What I meant does the rhyme carry it or is it simply written without concern for that. |
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Mother_Earth Senior Member
since 2000-11-20
Posts 13701/2 year Texas & 1/2 year Michigan |
JamesBowie, just a flow of how I felt. And 1&2, 3&4, 5&6 etc. Thanks though. Marge, I have been in such a strange mood lately. I think it has to do with us getting ready to go to our summer home. I am not ready!! Hugs |
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JamesBowie Member
since 2000-11-25
Posts 252big old Bangor Maine up by the shack |
ok that is helpful, thanks for your patience with me |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Well mixed emotions are the same for me...and by the way, didn't know I had to flow - he he  I shall definitely watch for that now, and I am serious! Just learning, but I will get the hang of this soon. I write what I think that is about it! I loved this, said a lot more to me than the few words penned. Thank you. |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
I'll take the apples. :-) I liked this. Thanks. Michael Proust- |
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Panne415 Member
since 2001-03-21
Posts 104San Antonio |
ME, Good questions, good replies and I liked your end line. Good poetry idea. Glad I stopped in. Panne |
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Mother_Earth Senior Member
since 2000-11-20
Posts 13701/2 year Texas & 1/2 year Michigan |
JamesBowie, you are welcome. Mysteria, I know what you mean!! When I read some of the poems, I can't make heads or tails of it and figure it is just me and not the poet. I guess we just write feel and to heck with the "flow". Auguste, thank you Panne415, thanks for the answer and glad you stopped by. |
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