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Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

0 posted 2001-03-31 01:20 PM

tonight
all I want
is to just be with you
to just have you next to me
when I write this
to have your green eyes
sparkle when I read it to you
to watch your cheeks turn red
when I'm done and say
"I Love You. . ."

to have your lips
gently touch my cheek
as I hear you whisper
"I Love You too. . ."

to watch you smile
that gentle smile
that makes me fall in love
with you all over again

to hold your body
close in my arms
and dance with you
for the first time
when that song
comes on the radio

tonight
all I want
is just
to love you

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

doreen peri
Member Elite

since 1999-05-25

Posts 3812
Virginia

1 posted 2001-03-31 01:34 PM

... it's a beautiful poem with lovely wonderful thoughts here, john.... but... ppssssst.... the eyes are hazel/brown/with green specks.... *wink*

just to let you know in case you wanna edit it... LOL

seriously, though.... i had to turn my computer back on to read this one!!! hehe

byeeee.... turning it off again....

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

2 posted 2001-03-31 04:04 PM

Oh yeah...these words are hot...James

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

3 posted 2001-03-31 04:13 PM

to just acknowledge, this is lovely....and today, I'm very glad for green eyes....

Katherine Chandler
Member

since 2001-03-07

Posts 280
Florida, USA

4 posted 2001-03-31 05:16 PM

Sven, how beautiful these words are, gentle and tender..I just loved this one.

Kate

Blessings..

Genuine poetry can communicate before it is understood.
T S Eliot

Just A Woman
Senior Member

since 2001-03-10

Posts 507

5 posted 2001-03-31 05:35 PM

You capture the beauty of new love. *smiling*
~as all the women in the room swoon~

"I can't remember if I'm the good twin or the evil one."

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

6 posted 2001-03-31 06:21 PM

reminds me of a song "Don't it make my brown eyes blue"

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

7 posted 2001-03-31 08:17 PM

doreen, thanks for the reminder. . . you'd think that I would have remembered. . .

. . . lol. . . and I knew that I could make you turn your computer back on!!!

James, thank you my friend. . .

Sunshine, thank you. . . and I used green eyes here. . .just because everybody uses blue eyes. . . and why do they get to have all the fun??

Kate, thank you my friend, I'm glad that you enjoyed. . .

Just a Woman, there's just something about new love that makes you glow isn't there??? (and if all the women are swooning, it's probably because there's something in the air, not because of my poem!!)

Irish Rose, I know that song well. . .thank you. . .

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