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0 posted 2001-03-31 12:04 PM



Strawberry Smiles
Virginia Salter


blue jeans
turtle-neck pull-over
tenny runners on her feet
short, disheveled, blond curls
brushed back with pudgy, dusty, soiled fingers
cheek smudge of strawberry brown
stained lips smile
with eye-twinkle sparkling in the sun

poised after a berry patch day
fat hand holding that strawberry hallick
partly filled with fruit
seeds stuck in teeth
her strawberry heart grins her lips



such joy fills my heart
that this sweet piece of my soul
cherishes God’s heart-shaped treasures just as I

it could so be me
when at the same age
I wandered in from Uncle Richard’s garden
earned my nickname, “Neater”
for I announced
when asked where I’d been
(as if no tell-tale signs were seen)
“I was in the garden an’ I eat’n’eat’n’eat’n’eat.”

strawberries
my truly favorite fruit
surely passed through
umbilical
and grew ravenously
in the heart and taste buds
of my sweet, sweet child

in so many ways
our hearts are joined
bonded forever in love



©March 29, 2000


© Copyright 2001 Virginia Salter - All Rights Reserved
doreen peri
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1 posted 2001-03-31 12:26 PM


a

delicious



read!!!

VAS
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2 posted 2001-03-31 12:28 PM


Thanks, doreen!  btw, do you know why my animated heart isn't beating???????
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3 posted 2001-03-31 01:41 PM


The heart seems to be beating fine on my computer, Virginia...and this poem made me think of summer! Very picturesque.  
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4 posted 2001-03-31 02:33 PM


Yep, it's beating on mine, now, too!

Glad you enjoyed.  It was inspired by one of my favorite photos of my daughter when she was about 3 years old and memories of my own childhood in my uncle's strawberry patch.

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