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Suetang
Member Ascendant

since 2001-03-07

Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia

0 posted 2001-03-31 06:53 AM

The sweet aroma of gardenia
So sensually it fills the room
It's perfume so exquisite
So easily it makes me swoon

The glow on your face
By the firelight
On a sheepskin rug
Is where we'll stay all night

On the mantle stands two glasses
Beside the crystal jar
Alongside is a bottle of red - pinot noir

As I stand before you
You take hold of my hand
As you whisper to me
What you have planned

The scent of pine I can smell
From your gorgeous aftershave
How on earth do you expect me to behave?
Such a smell brings my senses to the fore
As you tenderly lower me down on the floor

So much love to be made
By the fire's warm glow
There's so many things
I want you to know

How tender you are
As I respond to your touch
Feelings such as these
Could never be too much

As you gaze down on me
And our fingers interlace
I know that there couldn't possibly be
Any better place

Your sweet kisses warm my soul
As my heart starts beating fast
If only our time together
Could forever last

My hands caress your shoulders
As I draw you into me
As we're about to go to heaven
Where our passions will be set free

Such love we have made
As you envelop me in your arms
Oh, how soon again I'll surrender
To your manly charms

Suetang

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

1 posted 2001-03-31 07:58 AM

Sounds like you have some romantic evenings...James

serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

2 posted 2001-04-01 12:04 PM

A very tender tribute of love for someone obviously very special. made me say MMMMMMMMMM!

JamesBowie
Member

since 2000-11-25

Posts 252
big old Bangor Maine up by the shack

3 posted 2001-04-01 12:16 PM

this is very sensual, I guess some might call it profane out of context. But I like the ability to write anything with this much enthusiasm.

Krawdad
Member Elite

since 2001-01-03

Posts 2597

4 posted 2001-04-01 01:38 AM

"warm my soul" indeed!

A sweet and gentle passion, nicely captured.

/:-}==
=#===

Auguste

Member Elite

since 2000-02-16

Posts 3953
By the sea

5 posted 2001-04-01 01:48 AM

Sue,

Lovely imagery, softly sensual, very romantic. He's a lucky man. Thank you.

Michael

Proust-
"Love is space and time measured by the heart"

Suetang
Member Ascendant

since 2001-03-07

Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia

6 posted 2001-04-01 06:05 PM

Thank you all for your comments and I'm glad you enjoyed my poem. Am I allowed to blame the glass of white wine I was drinking at the time for this piece of writing or just my vivid imagination??
Kind regards, Sue.

Suetang

Dee
Member Elite

since 2000-08-19

Posts 2330
Queensland, Australia

7 posted 2001-04-02 08:57 PM

Sue, your imagery is wonderful. This is a very romantic sensual piece. Enjoyed.

Dee

I wish you every happiness and may you always have the best of the good things in life. a brand

Suetang
Member Ascendant

since 2001-03-07

Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia

8 posted 2001-04-03 12:24 PM

Thank you Dee....nice to hear from another Aussie!! Kind regards, Sue.

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

9 posted 2001-04-03 09:09 PM

I smell it!!

Kathleen Blake

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee

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