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PoeticaL
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since 2001-03-31
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0 posted 2001-03-31 02:13 AM



Maybe we can give away
All the kites
That escaped their strings

And have a cat
that purrs for strangers
so they too can sing

I’ll make some espresso
And well watch the sea
Crawl up the shore just so

You can design the logo
I’ll give you the thumbs up
When it’s a perfect go

I’ll make homemade bubbles
The kind that come
From liquid joy

Your little girl can
Giggle and play
With my artsy little boy

Hell we might even be happy
I think happy comes visiting
When you live your dream

I say we have a rant night
And then we can rave loud
Screaming out really proud

I say lets print poetry
On 100% cotton beach towels
Lets be cool and charge by the vowel

We’ll promote those oatmeal cookies
And they’ll always be on sale
Just look for “Sweetness in the Mail”

I say lets mastermind the simple
That life can surely be
Lets name it “Blissful by the sea”


Thanks for the awesome welcome Doreen, lets not forget to dream!  A dream is just a thought turned
into reality!



"I'm a junkyard full of false starts....Elliot Smith"

[This message has been edited by PoeticaL (edited 03-31-2001).]

© Copyright 2001 Kristy - All Rights Reserved
doreen peri
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1 posted 2001-03-31 02:26 AM


....you're the greatest...
....store front open...
.... logo on design...

.....we're the tide.... give us waves...
we will not die inside our graves
we will be blissful, on the dime....
it's poetry..... we'll rhyme on time
and yes, your verse is awesome, true...

one day we'll win
on waves of blue.....

Nan
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2 posted 2001-03-31 08:08 AM


If you're gonna charge by the vowel... Maybe you should be "Blissful by the Sea" in Hawaii... ya think??? What a plan!!!
Gentle Spirit
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3 posted 2001-03-31 09:51 AM


Welcome to passions!  I enjoyed this....especially lets charge by the vowel....well done.    

Enjoy life...this is NOT a dress rehearsal. *s*

doreen peri
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4 posted 2001-03-31 05:01 PM


bumping this back up top... great poem... thanks for sharing my dream....  
Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
5 posted 2001-03-31 05:03 PM


Hey....this is a charmer, AND a keeper....
Brad Majors
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Georgia
6 posted 2001-04-06 10:40 AM


Lovely scene  
nakdthoughts
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7 posted 2001-04-06 11:43 AM


I say lets print poetry
On 100% cotton beach towels
Lets be cool and charge by the vowel


wonderful loved the thought...hey it may even be something real to do....I wouldn't mind laying on a romantic verse or two..

~Wynter/Maureen

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II



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