Open Poetry #13 |
Blissful by the Sea (the original..) |
PoeticaL Member
since 2001-03-31
Posts 50 |
Maybe we can give away All the kites That escaped their strings And have a cat that purrs for strangers so they too can sing I’ll make some espresso And well watch the sea Crawl up the shore just so You can design the logo I’ll give you the thumbs up When it’s a perfect go I’ll make homemade bubbles The kind that come From liquid joy Your little girl can Giggle and play With my artsy little boy Hell we might even be happy I think happy comes visiting When you live your dream I say we have a rant night And then we can rave loud Screaming out really proud I say lets print poetry On 100% cotton beach towels Lets be cool and charge by the vowel We’ll promote those oatmeal cookies And they’ll always be on sale Just look for “Sweetness in the Mail” I say lets mastermind the simple That life can surely be Lets name it “Blissful by the sea” Thanks for the awesome welcome Doreen, lets not forget to dream! A dream is just a thought turned into reality! "I'm a junkyard full of false starts....Elliot Smith" [This message has been edited by PoeticaL (edited 03-31-2001).] |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
....you're the greatest... ....store front open... .... logo on design... .....we're the tide.... give us waves... we will not die inside our graves we will be blissful, on the dime.... it's poetry..... we'll rhyme on time and yes, your verse is awesome, true... one day we'll win on waves of blue..... |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
If you're gonna charge by the vowel... Maybe you should be "Blissful by the Sea" in Hawaii... ya think??? What a plan!!! |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Welcome to passions! I enjoyed this....especially lets charge by the vowel....well done. Enjoy life...this is NOT a dress rehearsal. *s* |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
bumping this back up top... great poem... thanks for sharing my dream.... |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Hey....this is a charmer, AND a keeper.... |
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Brad Majors
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
Lovely scene |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I say lets print poetry On 100% cotton beach towels Lets be cool and charge by the vowel wonderful loved the thought...hey it may even be something real to do....I wouldn't mind laying on a romantic verse or two.. ~Wynter/Maureen "The worst prison would be a closed heart". |
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