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Daniel J D
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since 2000-10-01
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Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia

0 posted 2001-03-31 02:06 AM


Real Friendship.

~~Daniel J D~~

Seen, heard, it all
How friendship shapes us all
Identified, and experienced I have
What is perceived as real friendship to have

Friendship, is simple as an expression
Friendship, is a game we put in motion
It is the nerve in us to say we really care
However, deep within we have nil to share

Friendship is a point of view from our inside
Friendship is us looking to our outside
Now let me take you to real friendship

Stand by an elm, wrap your arms around
Take off your shoes, walk through the meadow
Stop your route, and call on the horse feeding
Spread your hands full of grain for the lost lamb
Leave the annoying fly alone, listen to it buzzing
Gather the seedlings beneath the tree, and plant them carefully
Enjoy the sounds of the birds without annoyance
Tell yourself that they are no distrubance
Speak to the grasshopper, see it listen joyfully
Watch the flow of the brook, as it carries the fallen leaves
Hold the hands of the destitute, share a meal
Seek shelter among the poor or the damned, is not that real
Listen to the sounds of loneliness, do not ask questions
Find answers, let the freedom of your senses guide your notions
When you throw crumbs to the dog, do it because you love the animal
Do not dismiss the child that needs to be heard,that is how you learn
When you promise, retain your word with openess of heart
In the cold of winter lend your coat to the homeless
When you wake feeling worn, from having helped others
Find the quickest way out to reach out to others in need
That is real friendship!


Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love
(Daniel J D)

© Copyright 2001 Daniel J D Ringuet - All Rights Reserved
Paula Finn
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since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546
missouri
1 posted 2001-03-31 02:46 AM


Yes it is indeed...wonderful poem Daniel
Irish Rose
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since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263

2 posted 2001-03-31 04:27 AM


IT's beautiful...and real friendship is so rare these days.  Thank you for this one!

Kathleen Blake

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee


Waseem Cheema
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since 2001-03-16
Posts 369
Pakistan
3 posted 2001-03-31 05:25 AM


"Friendship, is simple as an expression
Friendship, is a game we put in motion
It is the nerve in us to say we really care
However, deep within we have nil to share"
is really great. Yes now a days it is very hard to find. May God bless u and meet u to her..............


I love to nice poetry.

Gentle Spirit
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since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989

4 posted 2001-03-31 09:55 AM


Friendship is kind, friendship is true
friendship is loving, no matter what we do.
Friendship is taking the time to share
and not being afraid to show that we care.......

Your poem exemplifies what the true meaning of friendship is Daniel, and I think no one could ask to have a better friend than you.
Beautiful...

Enjoy life...this is NOT a dress rehearsal. *s*

Lone Wolf
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since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842
Lansing, MI USA
5 posted 2001-04-02 11:43 PM


You have said it all, Daniel.  Real frienship is a treasure.  You are truly blessed if you have real friends.  

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

RMW
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since 2001-03-21
Posts 1424

6 posted 2001-04-03 12:03 PM


Daniel J D...."find the quickest way to reach out to others..." There you go. Well said. Bob  PS You need not have added "in need". We are ALL in need.
Kethry
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082
Victoria Australia
7 posted 2001-04-03 08:58 AM


Well Done!
Kethry

Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen.



Rosebud1229
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since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813
North Carolina
8 posted 2001-04-03 12:03 PM


your so right Daniel, we all need a friend, and the only way is to reach out.
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