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PoeticaL
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since 2001-03-31
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0 posted 2001-03-31 01:06 AM


my pretty head PEZ hinge
swings back
sweet nothings HARD like
sour CANDY
push forth FROM my depths
like YOUR row of lies
tilt my TWISTED cartoon face
sprung the spring
too tight
my LOVE flings itself
out LIKE shots from
a gun at NIGHT
i'm winning
the DEADLY race
stun
shot
for FUN
my plastic caricature GUN
dead in YOUR face
now you must love me
you're PARALYZED
there you are
with your sweet EYES
rolled white
my SUGARED square icicle
hangs
from your chest
you need ME
more than i need you
overlooking your LIES
i'm your consolation prize
at the bottom of the cracker jacks
jack you HAD TO come back
B-cuz where would YOU be
without my sweet candy?
yeah you LOVE me
now all's fine and DANDY?

"I'm a junkyard full of false starts....Elliot Smith"

© Copyright 2001 Kristy - All Rights Reserved
doreen peri
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since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812
Virginia
1 posted 2001-03-31 01:26 AM


YOU
are
PEZ


People
Endearing
Zest

welcome to the blue pages, my friend...... write write and PEZ if you need to,
but  let me have a taste... lol


-There is no Devil. Just God when He drinks. - Tom Waits

[This message has been edited by doreen peri (edited 03-31-2001).]

Brad Majors
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Georgia
2 posted 2001-04-06 10:37 AM


I remember pez. The candy sucked but the dispensers were cool   Great piece!
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