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PoeticaL
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since 2001-03-31
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0 posted 2001-03-31 01:02 AM


Eyes searing my back
Sizzle away my owner ship
Can't be here
Can't be there
I can't find it anywhere
I'm all over the floor
Crawling bawling
My mind takes flight
Out the window
Drowning in the shore
The rain pelts dents
Down in the metal of my
Cortex
Nowhere to run
Running
Nowhere to find
Running
Something must be better
Than the same thing
Night after night
Day after Afternoon
Every way doom
Something new I didn't
Know
Caving in
Paving thin
No
So
Slow
Same
Game
Nothing more

"I'm a junkyard full of false starts....Elliot Smith"

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RMW
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since 2001-03-21
Posts 1424

1 posted 2001-03-31 01:26 AM


Poetical...."...the rain pelts dents...." It has always amazed me how rain on a metal roof can soothe.   Bob
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Georgia
2 posted 2001-04-06 10:36 AM


Another amazing piece  
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