To whisper his name in vain

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Open Poetry #13

To whisper his name in vain

walker
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since 2001-02-11

Posts 2240
Florida

0 posted 2001-03-30 06:24 PM

A sparrow,
said to her,
"Love brings, agony and defeat"
A thousand times,
minuscule in a flash,
she saw her life.
In simplicity,
she opened her mouth,
no reponse came out.
Fearing the inevitable,
she got goose bumps on her back.
She tried to answer once again,
and failed,
to whisper his name in vain.

A quarter of a century must pass, for the writer to understand what and why he writes.

JLR
Senior Member

since 2001-02-04

Posts 1785

1 posted 2001-03-30 06:35 PM

Really like this!

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

2 posted 2001-03-30 07:41 PM

Very stark....very good....

Dennis
Member

since 2001-02-19

Posts 235
Indiana

3 posted 2001-03-30 09:02 PM

Many deep thoughts in this one......wow

Dennis

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