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Left in dust of a parade in passing... |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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There is nothing- nothing left even thought of you inept a feast of bankrupt for the king I tried to think of everything all my labors for your sup the finest wine to fill your cup the grandest silks I did adorn a curtsey--practiced in the morn before the pond while at its still while sun was rising in full shill... I hear the horses, sweet drum beat, bass, in pound, passing--fleet... and in dismay upon my feet are the tears of you, un-meet. So the parade, it passed me by... the tears in sting-- a cheek's mapped sighs, always I will wonder why I did not catch the sweet king's eye... |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Serenity, I know I've told you this many times, but, I love the way you write....you are so awesome!  SEA |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
How I do relate, sweet lady... and how well you do write!!! This is great! |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
I tried to think of everything all my labors for your sup the finest wine to fill your cup the grandest silks I did adorn a curtsey--practiced in the morn before the pond while at its still while sun was rising in full shill... ====================== and in dismay upon my feet are the tears of you, un-meet. So the parade, it passed me by... the tears in sting-- a cheek's mapped sighs, always I will wonder why I did not catch the sweet king's eye... =============================== me thinks the king needs glasses  me thinks you are working these metaphors to poetic perfection ... me thinks they way you rhyme in tears and sighs is poety in motion... me thinks me is a fan  me |
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bslicker
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
Maybe you haven't caught the king's eye yet, but you will on one of the parades....... by the way pour me a shot tooooo... I'm ready Great write.. Bernie a a day keeps the world 'gBernie Slicker [This message has been edited by bslicker (edited 03-30-2001).] |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I thank you all much, but you DO see what I mean? Kinda dusty here.... Again, I do thank you all. Just a bad day. My mood ring is black. My horoscope said, "go back to bed" and I don't even have a bed. My biorhythms? Forget 'em! Off the chart.  Somebody? Quick, kiss me! Make me smile! oooh...that almost worked.... *pouting, me* [This message has been edited by serenity (edited 03-31-2001).] |
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