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Wilfred Yeats
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0 posted 2001-03-30 03:05 PM


Oysters

I never sought out Oysters
As food - not a special treat for me
But pearls, a prospect that intrigued
Could fill me with such glee

thus begun my education

Hence my youth was spend with these
Even before I knew the difference
Clams, oysters or mussels - all alike
Looking for pearls as if I were a 'fence'

not realizing the real treasures held

Thank God for maturity, I finally learned
Biology, anatomy, the meaning of love
Memories washed over me, times I was burned
The first touch, the first kiss, thoughts of heaven above

then when drawing parallels

Finally true intimacy, are there words to express
Way beyond consortium, way beyond phrases
We seek expressions ways to find higher planes
New shells to open, lips parting in phases

knowing an oyster does not part easily

So -you know now, my oyster, my sweet darling girl
My taste buds are enhanced, I'm now insatiable
For I've heard your cries, yea I've found the best pearl
Showing you all my love, the love's created a pull

you broke forth in fluid motion

An epicure's dining, a jeweler's great treasure
Found only in you, I embrace you with pleasure
Such art's education, on my knees take my measure
You've taught me so well, I'm gourmand connoisseur

could not imagine the range of tastes

So take me my darling, are there new ways to love thee
New ways to express love I embrace all with glee
For each time we embrace, I'm yours to command
And with every sweet kiss my will turns to sand

I even loved the grit of you

If sand is what oysters turn into pearls
I'm on the right track for I love them unfurled
You're my treasure, my life,  my love's yours in total
If you ever leave me - the effect would be fatal


The first duty of love is to listen.

~ Paul Tillich ~

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1 posted 2001-03-30 03:10 PM


Why Mr. Yeats!  Wow!
Paula Finn
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2 posted 2001-03-31 03:08 AM


What a marvelous poem...such love you express for this woman of yours...
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3 posted 2001-03-31 05:05 AM


ah yes, and so he is inspired...lovely!!!!!!!!!

Kathleen Blake

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and the sun drips honey."
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Wilfred Yeats
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4 posted 2001-04-02 10:35 AM


Pearls are found in unusual places - _ I'm glad you share my vision ~S~ - Thank you so much

[This message has been edited by Wilfred Yeats (edited 04-02-2001).]

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5 posted 2001-04-12 01:58 AM


Sounds very much like a man in love...what a lucky lady
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6 posted 2001-04-21 03:29 PM


I even loved the grit of you----


I LOVE that line! In fact, I love the entire poem...glad I went diving a few pages back--I never would have found this pearl of a poem. Just beautiful!


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7 posted 2001-04-21 03:43 PM


Wilfred~
Delightful !

I enjoy a collection of pearls
and think I'll add this gem !
~*Marge*~

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8 posted 2001-04-21 05:04 PM


                    "If sand is what oysters turn into pearls
                    I'm on the right track for I love them unfurled
                    You're my treasure, my life,  my love's yours in total
                    If you ever leave me - the effect would be fatal"

Maybe SOMEDAY the hubby will write like this for me.....*sigh* beautiful WY    SEA

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9 posted 2001-04-21 07:03 PM


bowing in respect to one of the great Romantic masters. . . Sir, you inspire us all. . .

superb. . .

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10 posted 2001-04-22 11:22 AM


Your poem is so beautiful.  Hard to believe it started with oysters.
Wilfred Yeats
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11 posted 2001-04-22 11:20 PM


it is my fate - to always be skirting the edges of "open" propriety - I'm pleased you found this acceptable -
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