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Southern Lullabye (song)
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Southern Lullabye (song) |
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Jesse Jaymz Senior Member
since 2000-01-24
Posts 708Youngstown, ohio 
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hey yall. just wrote this song. started it last ngiht at band practice and finished it today. let me know what yall think,  oh yeah the little letters above the words are the chords you play on your trusty little guitar Southern lullabye By: Jesse Jaymz D G Sitting here on this lonely greyhound bus D A thinking of the one i miss so much D G i look out at the stars as i turn out the light D A D wishing i was back at home tonight D A Goodnight, my little baby goodnight D A i wish that i was there to hold you tight D i just want you to know G how much i love you so D A D so good night my little baby goodnight D G just crossed the mississippi state line D A And i'm about to brake down and start cryin D G i am sorry for all the hell i put you threw D A D but its one more gig and i'm coming home to you D A Goodnight, my little baby goodnight D A i wish that i was there to hold you tight D i just want you to know G how much i love you so D A D so good night my little baby goodnight D G I wish that there was something i could do D A to show you that my love is really true D G so dry those tears and try not to weep D A D Just close your eyes and i'll sing you off to sleep D A Goodnight, my little baby goodnight D A i wish that i was there to hold you tight D i just want you to know G how much i love you so D A D G so good night my little baby goodnight D A G D sleep tight my little baby sleep tight... Follow me everything is alright |
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dragonpoe Senior Member
since 2000-11-12
Posts 608Palm Bay, Florida |
How beautiful, Jesse. this is the kind of writing I like to read from you, so soft and romantic. Keep 'em coming. With the word, I am mighty, with the pen I am free.. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
How could anyone resist? *S* This is beautiful... the love flows through. *S* |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Like this song Jesse...James |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Printing, and playing! Liking, too! [This message has been edited by Sunshine (edited 03-30-2001).] |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
hey jes! so glad your ole rickety computer allowed you to post this one  you know i love it! wish i could hear you sing it make me a tape? popper and davis would be proud....  take care, you...will look for you again when i pop in here and there... hugs, g where am i...WHOA! and what am i doing in this handbasket!?! |
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Temptress
Moderator
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
I'd say this would make a good country song. Check your e-mail, hon. |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
This is a good old country tune. Wish my husband was here to play it on his guitar for me. Joyce |
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Greeneyes 
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
from one raised southern to the other, lovin'it ya'll...*l* wonderful write...thanks... Greeneyes~ *** "Within you I lose myself |
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Jesse Jaymz Senior Member
since 2000-01-24
Posts 708Youngstown, ohio |
thank you all so mcuh for all these replys. i wasnt expecting all of these. i posted this, went off to play a gig, get home and just smiled. thank you all very much. temptress. ok hun what e-mail addy?? greeneyes: good to hear from a sweet southern belle. thankssuthern. thanks to you too dgvarner: hehehe i wish i could make you a tape dragonpoe, joyce, james, thank you all too. and yes this is alittle bit on the country side yall love you all jesse Follow me everything is alright |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Jesse, A lovely lullaby You do realize that you are gonna have to play for me sometime don't you? I can't wait to hear it.Warm hugs  rp25 |
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kitkat Senior Member
since 2000-01-11
Posts 878Nova Scotia |
Wow Jesse!!! This was really lovely... I wish I could hear ya sing it. Nicwe job my friend. -------------- |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
This was a wonderful and sweet lullabye. I bet it sounds beautiful. Nice job! All writing comes |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggssssss) Oh my gosh, this is sooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, your gorgeous words of love always touch my heart so much! (sigh) May you find the love of your dreams and forever serenade her to sleep lovingly with your loving words from your golden heart, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Jesse, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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