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Open Poetry #13
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PoemCrazy
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since 2000-11-30
Posts 159
0 posted 2001-03-30 04:11 AM


your name fits my lips like forever
but never aloud.
sometimes if i'm just standing there,
looking into nowhere,
i'm just repeating it,
endlessly,
endlessly,
endlessly,
but not with my lips.
this blood's 4U!...

wow, i'm strange...tom
© Copyright 2001 Tom - All Rights Reserved
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with you
1 posted 2001-03-30 01:32 PM

This isn't strange, it's great!    SEA
dragonpoe
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since 2000-11-12
Posts 608
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2 posted 2001-03-30 03:08 PM

wow, the first 9 lines are so strong and well versed, then I read that last line and all the feeling inside came out as a giggle, how cool. Enjoyed the read.  

With the word, I am mighty, with the pen I am free..
dragonpoe
Irish Rose
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since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263
3 posted 2001-04-04 07:55 PM

good poetry, very good
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