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Open Poetry #13

Heavenly Temptations

KokoStewartKoomoa
Senior Member

since 2000-12-04

Posts 580
Waikiki, Hawaii

0 posted 2001-03-30 03:55 AM

Crescent moon shining
Ebony velvet heaven
The edge of a spoon
Cutting into a pudding
Deliciously decadent

Passion,imagination
and intellect
running together...
Poetry in motion~~~

Aloha with
warmest regards, Koko

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

1 posted 2001-03-30 07:47 AM

Aloha! SO good to see you, you are so lovely, I enjoyed this poem very much...

Kathleen Blake

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee

Dark Angel
Member Patricius

since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

2 posted 2001-03-30 08:24 AM

Hi Koko

This is beautiful

Maree

I may know the word but not say it
I may know the truth but not face it
I may hear a sound a whisper sacred and profound
but turn my head indifferent.

Natalie Merchant

[This message has been edited by Dark Angel (edited 03-30-2001).]

Nate Dogg
Senior Member

since 1999-11-15

Posts 1658
Georgia, Fulton

3 posted 2001-03-30 08:45 AM

Mmmm, this is a beautiful and tasty poem....brilliant writing!

Nathan

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

4 posted 2004-03-08 06:37 PM

Delicious Koko...James

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