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tradewind
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since 2001-03-25
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0 posted 2001-03-29 11:43 PM


the space between
each argument
gave dreams a common
place to fall

we sought love’s
solidarity
and here we are...

against the wall

© Copyright 2001 tradewind - All Rights Reserved
Severn
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since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704

1 posted 2001-03-30 12:01 PM


This is superb...

concise, neat, nicely placed words...

much enjoyed reading it!

K

tradewind
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since 2001-03-25
Posts 101

2 posted 2001-03-30 12:31 PM


thank you, Severn,
for the kind words...

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