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SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

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with you

0 posted 2001-03-29 11:02 PM

I am
Understanding
And full of so much love
Wanting only to give you some
Of me

~SEA~

Jamie
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since 2000-06-26

Posts 3168
Blue Heaven

1 posted 2001-03-29 11:06 PM

We all
need understood
and desire to be loved
by those who share theirs with kindness
like you

Jamie

Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil.
"Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely".

tradewind
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since 2001-03-25

Posts 101

2 posted 2001-03-29 11:08 PM

hey, SEA

nice work with this
do some more!

Panne415
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since 2001-03-21

Posts 104
San Antonio

3 posted 2001-03-29 11:09 PM

SEA, Very good. Nice formal cinquain. You chose your words just right. Panne

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

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Listening to every heart

4 posted 2001-03-29 11:10 PM

Ok, tomorrow I shall try one....but SEA, you do it SO well....

PoeticKnight
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since 2000-01-20

Posts 1144
New Orleans, LA

5 posted 2001-03-30 09:45 AM

And the line forms...? *L*
Nicely done, though I'm not familiar with cinquains.

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

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Tamarac Fla

6 posted 2001-03-30 09:50 AM

Sea,
Not familiar with cinquains but if panne liked it then it must be good. Good choice of words.

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

7 posted 2001-03-30 09:51 AM

Jamie~

thank you

Tradewind~ ok, thanks

Panne~ thank you, I'm new to this form, but I really like it!

Sunshine~ I'll be looking for it!

PK~ to the left honey.......( I don't know) I'm a fa-new-gi to this form

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

8 posted 2001-03-30 09:52 AM

Seymour~ thank you

PoeticKnight
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since 2000-01-20

Posts 1144
New Orleans, LA

9 posted 2001-03-30 10:23 AM

To the left? Looks like the right is wide open *S*...
So, we're doing cinquains now? 2,4,6,8,2 right? You might have started something here.

kaile

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since 2000-02-06

Posts 5146
singapore

10 posted 2001-03-31 11:14 AM

and fun to read too

carry on writing these

VAS
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since 2000-11-16

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Oregon

11 posted 2001-03-31 11:36 AM

Nice philosphy SEA!

Irish Rose
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since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

12 posted 2001-04-04 07:47 PM

You are a sweetgirl what a nice poem this is!

Interloper

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since 2000-11-06

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Deep in the heart

13 posted 2001-04-05 11:04 AM

All of me
Why not take all of me
Can't you see
I'm no good without you.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Keep on keepin' on SEA. You are 1derful.

Live for love. Without love, you don't live.

Lone Wolf
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since 2000-03-16

Posts 5842
Lansing, MI USA

14 posted 2001-04-05 11:06 AM

So nice to see more of this side of you, SEA. Wonderful!!

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

Parker
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since 2000-01-06

Posts 3129
ON

15 posted 2001-04-05 01:58 PM

I been waiting for you to say that.... give me some.

Oh, yes very nice form here.

Parker

Nate Dogg
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since 1999-11-15

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Georgia, Fulton

16 posted 2001-04-05 02:05 PM

Wonderful write, Sea......you made it look easy!

Nathan

bslicker

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since 2000-12-04

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state of mind

17 posted 2001-04-08 10:24 AM

You are!!!!!!!!!!!!

Bernie
A smile a day keeps the world

'g.

Bernie Slicker

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