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Dennis
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since 2001-02-19
Posts 235
Indiana

0 posted 2001-03-29 09:30 PM


I've fallen for a southern belle
but there is no one I can tell
she's beautiful in every way
but don't know if I should have my say.

She has long, brown hair or maybe black
I don't think there's anything she could lack
Her poetry flows like the wind and sea
but I know she'll never fall for me.

I'm just an Irishman living a dream
and reality is not as good as it would seem
I can barely rhyme or match her free verse
and my feelings feel so unrehearsed.

So I just read and watch her shine
hoping someone is treating her fine
because I feel she deserves the best
but gosh, I just can't get no rest.

Her name is matchless, free as the breeze
I can't tell you what it is, but it's not Louise!
it rhymes with the lines and in-between
she's my secret, the most gorgeous woman I've ever seen!



Dennis


[This message has been edited by Dennis (edited 03-29-2001).]

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Irish Rose
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since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263

1 posted 2001-03-29 09:39 PM


Go home and give me back my computer!  Jeez, I know it's not me, I'm your sister, I'd better warn every woman whose name rhymes with in-between!  This is really hard to figure out, Dennis, why don't you just dedicate the poem to her!!!!!   aghhhhhh

Kathleen Blake

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee


Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
2 posted 2001-03-29 09:46 PM


let me guess, let me guess!
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In Your Poetic Mind
3 posted 2001-03-29 09:49 PM


go for it.... best wishes, though I have no idea who it is.....


Greeneyes~




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Without you I find myself
Wanting to be lost again."
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suthern
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4 posted 2001-03-30 10:10 AM


Reading again to make sure even though the description doesn't fit *G* .... Nope, he didn't say suthern belle... So I'll just wish you good luck! *S*
inot2B
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since 2000-09-18
Posts 2205
Arkansas
5 posted 2001-03-30 10:16 AM


Now every woman will be trying to rhyme their with in-between.
Very good!
At least we know it's not Louise.

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200
Between the Lines
6 posted 2001-03-30 09:29 PM


well I am not southern
but I line in between (MD- PA line)
and my name does rhyme
as it is Maureen.....

but I know it isn't me you mean...*s

~Wynter

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II



doreen peri
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since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812
Virginia
7 posted 2001-03-30 10:02 PM


LOL!!!! i LOVE it!!

if i could rhymne with this
i'd be in bliss
and satisfy my long desire
but since i can't
i'll tell you, D,
you are an awesome full inspire
and maybe someday
you will find
some woman who'll
respond in kind
but as for me?
oh gosh oh gee
oh geez, oh blush
oh never mind


the days grow short
when life's resort
is posting loving poetry.....
how nice to know
your heart is so
entwined with Love
on bended knee....

oh god, i'm lost
without a cost
and cannot answer
to your plea
but i can say
your poetry
is awesome
and so very free

one day you'll find
somone to rhyme
within your title,
right on time,
until that day,
i wish array
of colors o
n the toss of dime

just throw the coin
up in the air
and i will bless
the girl who's there.....


[This message has been edited by doreen peri (edited 03-30-2001).]

Krawdad
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since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597

8 posted 2001-03-30 10:18 PM


Dennis,

You've got a secret gorgeous woman?  No!  On this site?  You must be the only one . . . . . . ya, right.

Hey, fun poem.

Kraw'

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