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The Heart Tattoo...
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The Heart Tattoo... |
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Balladeer
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since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA 
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I got tired of the party...it was moving kind of slow. I walked toward the front door and prepared myself to go When...there she stood...in front of me. She had a small tattoo, A red heart on her cheek containing three words..I LOVE YOU. Her look told me she had been watching me for quite a while. Her green eyes sparkled brightly - I was dazzled by her smile. I knew then that I had to know the real woman who Was there behind the heart tattoo that spelled out I LOVE YOU. We dated off and on for months. What wondrous days they were! I'd never felt so happy as the days I spent with her. Then we moved in together for there was no doubt I knew No one had loved me like the woman with the heart tattoo. The months flew by - the seasons changed - the new years came and went. We wrapped ourselves in Love's coccoon that felt so heaven-sent. Her eyes glowed at me lovingly and, always in full view, The red heart blazed on dimpled cheek that spelled out I LOVE YOU. It dawned on me, through all that time, that I'd heard no one speak One word about that tattooed heart she wore there on her cheek. I mentioned this and she just smiled and said, "I thought you knew.... The message on my face is only visible to you." My God! She'd known it right away! She'd loved me from the start! The love shine on her face to my eyes took the shape of heart And everything she felt for me came magically in view So much that, as I looked at her, it spelled out I LOVE YOU! I laughed so hard I cried - what magic she had given me To wear her love so openly that only I could see. I pulled her to me as I whispered, "Hon, I love you, too" Then kissed the cheek that wore the heart that spelled out I LOVE YOU. Then one night, after fitful sleep, I woke up with the dawn And, as I glanced upon her face, the heart tattoo was gone! I shook her and said, "Your tattoo! Oh, baby, where'd it go?" The sad look on her face then told me all I'd need to know. She has remarried. We're still friends. We speak once in a while. The only thing on her face now that I see is a smile. And me? I go through life with hopes of finding someone who Might have a heart upon her cheek that spells out I LOVE YOU. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
This is so BallaDEER everyone will join in saying .... Bravo for this.....and Bravo that you go on..... |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
This was so sad, but yet so beautiful. May you find that special tattooed heart very soon Deer. Well done indeed!!  Enjoy life...this is NOT a dress rehearsal. *s* |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Where ever do you get your ideas, my Deer friend??... This one's pretty original.. But then you're an original as well...  |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Lovely verse.......just lovely! Kathleen Blake |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
the tattoo says it all...... |
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Mother_Earth Senior Member
since 2000-11-20
Posts 13701/2 year Texas & 1/2 year Michigan |
Balladeer, you were so lucky once do you think you will get another chance? I hope so and I know you will keep looking. Your words are great and make us all wish it was possible to find the "I love you" heart on our next love. Hugs, ME |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
A heartbreaking write..... |
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Panne415 Member
since 2001-03-21
Posts 104San Antonio |
Balladeer, Great tale, great twist, great message of never give up and hope. Panne |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Sweet Balladeer...... .I have 4 tattoo's....... .......come here......... I bet they'll all say they love you!!  this does go directly to the heart.... you are amazing SEA |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
A Heart Upon My Cheek Each time he comes into my view My smile becomes an I love You It's written on my face you see, Those words that ink invisibly. ...to be continued *s..thank you for the Inspiration ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". |
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tradewind Member
since 2001-03-25
Posts 101 |
what an original idea with this one! enjoyed the story in the poem very creative |
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Balladeer
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since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Sunshine...thank you for calling it Balladeery...and, now, on with the show.. Gentle Spirit..Thank you for such kind words... Nan..vienna sausages immediately before bedtime...works every time  Rose...and thank you for a lovely reply! Doreen. and in a very cheeky way Mother Earth..who can say? Sometimes you find the tattoo...sometimes you GET tattoed...that's life. I thank you...Lady...as is life at times. Thank you for reading... Panne...when one gives up, it is truly lost, isn't it? Many thanks for your nice comment.. SEA....and I'm sure I would say I love you to all four of them!!! Can I hunt for them? Please?? You are terrific! Wynter...that is a great start!! Go for it!! tradewinds...I appreciate your reading and the comment. Thank you... [This message has been edited by Balladeer (edited 03-29-2001).] |
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Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
You sure know how to capture a story with heart...love this one! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Balladeer~ Are there just no limits to your talent ? A tattoo - and a at that ...Clever ... very clever ... Wanna play net the butterfly ?   ~*Marge*~~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Your "craft" is showing! This was wonderful. In answer to the search for the cheek with the tattoo, if she is the right one, the tattoo will be her heart, and only you will see it! |
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Andrew Scott Member Elite
since 1999-06-24
Posts 2558Redlands,CA,USA |
My Main Man Balladeer... another perfect view of the poet that is you. Been there a time or two myself. I bow to you and yours, but I must leave you with this one bit of wisdom... one's love for another must be seen by all if it is to remain... but then you knew that. Peace my friend. |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
Oh, I liked this sooo much, but I have to agee with Andrew. Your true love will want the whole world to know, when she finds you. Joyce |
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KokoStewartKoomoa Senior Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 580Waikiki, Hawaii |
You are a truly gifted artist. This one is a bit bittersweet and how I know this feeling. I wish you a permanent tattoo that is just right for you! You r poems are always very delightful. aloha, Koko Passion,imagination |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Deer, superb. Keth. Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen. |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
"The months flew by - the seasons changed - the new years came and went. We wrapped ourselves in Love's coccoon that felt so heaven-sent." Oh, you get a "three Michael" standing ovation for this treasure! Michael, Michael, Michael ... what a superb tale as only you can weave! Such a perfectly wonderful idea ... your imagination and creativity simply blows me away! What an incredible twist at the end of this piece ... beautifully flowing and composed. I absolutely adored this Michael! Best wishes and hugs, /Kit |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
The months flew by - the seasons changed - the new years came and went. We wrapped ourselves in Love's coccoon that felt so heaven-sent. Her eyes glowed at me lovingly and, always in full view, The red heart blazed on dimpled cheek that spelled out I LOVE YOU. It dawned on me, through all that time, that I'd heard no one speak One word about that tattooed heart she wore there on her cheek. I mentioned this and she just smiled and said, "I thought you knew.... The message on my face is only visible to you." My God! She'd known it right away! She'd loved me from the start! The love shine on her face to my eyes took the shape of heart And everything she felt for me came magically in view So much that, as I looked at her, it spelled out I LOVE YOU! ============================== *bowing to your talent* *surrendering to your rhyme* YOU ARE THE MAN!! This rocks Balladeer..the cadence dances and the sweet intent of story is poetic perfection ... and SO YOU!!! and that is tattooed on all our hearts love this one sweet spammy poet... youre so cool  oh you speak to me in riddles |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Balladeer, You know I saw that tattoo once, it's still there but the wording changed. Wonderful write. Now there is an idea for a sequel. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
You've penned another beauty here, ya scoundrel. *S* One that wraps the reader in your words from start to finish... At first, I was wishing if only it were that easy... true love should always be so readily visible to the recipient. *S* But then... to think of waking and seeing those words gone forever... well, that starts sounding more like my life. *G* Great work, Deer one! |
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inot2B Member Elite
since 2000-09-18
Posts 2205Arkansas |
My husband read this to me and then walked over to give me a hug and thank me, for he could see "I love you" tattooed in my eyes. Mr Deer, you're just so darn sweet.  |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
You have etched yourself on all of our hearts, my deer. Corinne |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Oh my....I just read Inot2b's response..... to have one that allows another freedom to read and post poetry...and not be jealous, but yet, take inspiration such as this..... and kindle a flame.... inot2b.....wow.... |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Martie...from one who does it equally as well, that is high praise...thank you, my friend.. Marge....my favorite game!!! Who's the butterfly this time? Mysteria...thank you. I keep staring at ladies hearts looking for it but they get real cranky!!  Sir Andrew!!!..I have missed you, my old compatriot!! Thank you for the comment and, yes, I do. My best to you and your wonderful family... Joyce...yes, Sir Andrew always speaks with wisdom and I thank you for enjoying... Koko...thank you for the kind wishes and a big aloha right back to you Kethry...you can make one word say a lot. Thank you, lady Kit Kit Kit...WOW! I've never had a "three" before. Thank you!! Your comment always mean so much because I love your work beyond words and I thank you for your kindness... JantMarie...Spam is getting worried. You are rapidly gaining on it in my heart! Thank you, show me gal... Sy...ain't it funny how that can happen? Those darned things are supposed to be permanent!! Thanks, Sy...for dropping by Suthern gal..LOL! Oh, I'm sure you would see it alright. You just have to get that scoundrel's face in front of you! Where is he?? He should be covered with tattoos for your sweet self and you can tell him I said so!! inot2B...you will never know how your response has touched me. I thank you and your lucky husband and I wish you both all the happiness in the world...that sounds like a tattoo that will NEVER fade... Corrine...and you have all done the same for me and I appreciate you Sunshine...I'll see the WOW and raise it a FANTASTIC!! |
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