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SEA
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0 posted 2001-03-29 07:21 PM



In another lifetime
in some other place
I'm sure I've had the pleasure
of your caress upon my face

I feel as though I know you
seems so familiar to me
like a de` ja vu
of a memory

in dreams I swear we've danced
in easy rhythm and flow
I can't explain this feeling
somehow I think you know

it's an instant comfort
soul's connected in some way
how it is or why it is
I  really cannot say

it's just this inner knowing
that we've met somewhere before
that tingle on your skin
you simply can't ignore

trying to understand is pointless
so I simply let it be
this fantastic recognition
between you and me


~SEA~



If I let you into my heart.....
will you promise to stay?
~Sue~

[This message has been edited by SEA (edited 03-29-2001).]

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bslicker
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1 posted 2001-03-29 07:26 PM


Sea,
Wow this happens just to much in life. Just shows you how small the world can really be. Just need to not let it pass by though. I like the title too..
I Like this... message sent.
Bernie.
a   a day keeps the world   'g.

Bernie Slicker

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2 posted 2001-03-29 07:27 PM


SEA~
And you know that I know this one by heart !

Just goes without saying that it's BEAUTIFUL !
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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3 posted 2001-03-29 07:27 PM


SEA, I know that feeling!  Hope you figure out when, where, how y'all met.  Lovely poem.
          Hugs,  ME

Isabella
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4 posted 2001-03-29 07:33 PM


Yes, I have felt this; thank you for this.

Belle

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5 posted 2001-03-29 07:36 PM


This does happen and sometimes it turns out bnicely.  I liked your poem  Joyce
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6 posted 2001-03-29 07:38 PM


Very good SEA.
Our lives are all entwined,
our "human-ness",
far more defined.
Thanks.

"The poet is the priest of the invisible."
Wallace Stevens

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7 posted 2001-03-29 07:46 PM


i would  say that i like this, but then,,,I think you heard it already....lol--( i do yanno)
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8 posted 2001-03-29 08:09 PM


Bernie~ It's happened a few times in my life...I've met someone and had instant recognition....I love it when that happens...thank you  

Marge~ I just knew you'd understand this!!thank you so much!  

M.E.~ It's ok if I never figure it out...but I'd like to.....maybe with hypnosis.....that would be so cool...thank you    

Isabella~    thank you  

Joyce~thank you very much  

Coyote~ neat, thak you  

Jamie~ I knew that   ( thank you )  

~SEA

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9 posted 2001-03-30 09:38 AM


Wow, oh yes...I have this feeling also. WOnderful, and yet, sad at the same time. Makes you think of fate and destiny and a lot of other deep stuff. Who we are, who we're with, who we've been with, who we should be with...etc. Wow. *S* I'm being inspired here.
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10 posted 2001-03-30 09:41 AM


You, my dear PK, hit the nail on the head.    SEA

[This message has been edited by SEA (edited 03-30-2001).]

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11 posted 2001-03-30 09:54 AM


SEA......quite lovely.   Bob
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12 posted 2001-03-30 10:20 AM


Just using my mental hammer over here SEA. Driving the nail in.
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13 posted 2001-03-31 10:18 AM


Sometimes feelings override understand and thank God, they do!  I enjoyed every word.

Kathleen Blake

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee


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