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Kitty**
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since 1999-07-27
Posts 428
Charlottesville,VA USA

0 posted 2001-03-29 05:22 PM


This little ditty came from trying to get all of
my bills paid....Can anybody identify..????
I wrote it in RED TOO!!!


                      


I take one step forward,
and fall back two.
I often whonder what
else I can do.
The harder I try,
It gets harder by day.
Once I'd like to gain,
but there is no way.
I want to get up,
I'm tired of lying down.
I'm only sinking, and
soon I'm gonna drown.
I'm told to be tough,
it's what I should do.
But I'm tired of swimming,
in this damn life's stew.

If you can't make it so,
you need to let it go!

© Copyright 2001 Kitty Sandridge - All Rights Reserved
RMW
Senior Member
since 2001-03-21
Posts 1424

1 posted 2001-03-29 05:53 PM


Hope.........floats. Enjoyed this.  Bob
Mabel A. Dilley
Senior Member
since 2001-03-17
Posts 859
Seattle, WA, USA
2 posted 2001-03-29 06:32 PM


Been there, done that and bought the T-shirt. I went to a debt consolidation expert. Much happier now.

"I am not now that which I have been."

Kitty**
Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 428
Charlottesville,VA USA
3 posted 2001-03-29 07:40 PM


HEY, RMW and Julian Lester....It's good to know I am not A.L.O.N.E. ;-)
Glad to know everything has a way of working out though.
If I have nothing else I have HOPE!!

Thanks to both of you for reading and replying!

Kitty

If you can't make it so,
you need to let it go!

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