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JamesBowie
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big old Bangor Maine up by the shack

0 posted 2001-03-29 07:17 AM




and with those final words
he threw down his empty beer
then turned and slammed the door

finally the nasty little weasle
poking out from the lizard brain
has had his say

© Copyright 2001 James Bowie - All Rights Reserved
Nan
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1 posted 2001-03-29 07:21 AM


Mornin' James... You surely have a way of having your say!!!...  
JamesBowie
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big old Bangor Maine up by the shack
2 posted 2001-03-29 07:25 AM


yeah well Nan, I finally talked to my oldest brother about his drinking and he responded just as stated. One more battle lost- but maybe not totally-
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3 posted 2001-03-29 07:35 AM


JBowie~
Keep talking ... meted out with lots of touch-love ...
Well said, brother.
~*Marge*~

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4 posted 2001-03-29 09:00 AM


At least you spoke out. Now it's up to him how he wants to deal with the rest of his life. I'm proud of you!
JamesBowie
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big old Bangor Maine up by the shack
5 posted 2001-03-29 09:01 AM


Thank you very much
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6 posted 2001-03-29 09:08 AM


Much said with this, James.  Powerful writing.  I compliment you.  

"Often the test of courage is not to die but to live"

~Vittorio Alferi~

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7 posted 2001-03-29 09:44 AM


so hard this must be...I can't even imagine  going through this with my brother......it'd kill me......I hope he hears you    SEA
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