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Marge Tindal
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0 posted 2001-03-29 07:08 AM


Incredibly Blue ...
~*Marge Tindal*~

Incredibly blue ...
that's me without you
What's a girl s'posed to do
when she feels so incredibly blue ?


Envious green ...
no doubt to be seen
Where are the dreams
when a girl feels so enviously green ?


Desire crimson red ...
going on in my head
Should I forget you instead
not feeling this blush of crimson red ?


Deep purple thought
in nighttime is caught
I know that I ought
to get over you
without this shaded hue
that keeps me feeling

so incredibly blue ...

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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© Copyright 2001 Marge Tindal - All Rights Reserved
JamesBowie
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1 posted 2001-03-29 07:20 AM


Even you now Marge? hope this was just a made up story- if not- all the best to your big big heart
Marge Tindal
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2 posted 2001-03-29 07:30 AM


JBowie~

P romise of phrase
O n turn of quill
E ver enchanted
M uses write what they will !

Thanks for the morning read, my friend.
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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inot2B
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3 posted 2001-03-29 09:12 AM


Truth or not it does not matter. Beautifully written with your colorful pen.
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4 posted 2001-03-29 09:18 AM


Marge~ as always, amazing.... ( when I grow up, I want to be just like you )   SEA
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5 posted 2001-03-29 09:32 AM


your poetic box of crayons is most lovely Margie girl ...
a bittersweet rainbow reflection here my dear  
way cool ... you are   groovy too.  

JamesMichael
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6 posted 2001-03-29 09:36 AM


I suppose I am incredibly blue myself...and chocolate...James
Sudhir Iyer
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7 posted 2001-03-29 09:39 AM


Marge,
It's you...
just incredibly you!

regards,
sudhir

Wilfred Yeats
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8 posted 2001-03-29 11:35 AM


not only beautiful to read - but fun too -
kitkat
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9 posted 2001-03-29 02:23 PM


Very nicely done Marge. Let me pass you my Yellow crayon..Hoping to give you some Sunshine :-)

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You got to get up every morning with a smile on your face
and show the world all the love in your heart
Then people are gonna treat

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10 posted 2001-03-29 02:29 PM


Oops, heard Kitkat - Sunshine here....dispelling all those blue days, but hey, on the other hand, I think I'll just take away your box of crayons!

You're just so darn colorful!

Cerenity
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11 posted 2001-03-29 03:07 PM


Hi Marge,

Penned so beautifully as always very much liked this one,

Love, Cerenity

"God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist.
We have to be reminded that He exist!"

(Writer Unknown)



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12 posted 2001-03-29 04:49 PM


Sunshine: Do not, repeat NOT take Marge's crayons from her... for we'd all lose so much beauty! *S* Just hand over the yellows and oranges and pinks and give her a lovely sunrise. *S*

Marge: You can even make aching loneliness and missing miserably beautiful, gal.... Well done!

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13 posted 2001-03-29 07:24 PM


Inot2B~
Thank you so very much.

SEA~
Awwwww !
Such a lovely thing to say -
The secret is in not growing up ! Shhhhhhhh !

JamesMichael~
Yum !  Sounds scrumptious !

Sudhir~
WOW ... that's a pretty neat thing to say !
You're pretty gosh-darned incredible yourself !

Wilfred~
Pleased to share beauty and joy with you anytime.

KitKat~
Look at you ...
a regular magician -
here come the
.
.
.
.
Sunshine~
Oh, no ... not my crayons !
Pretty please ... not my crayons !
Tee-Hee !

Cerenity~
Thank you bunches, sweetie.

Suthern~
Yellow is sooooooo mellow
And I suppose I would be in the pink
With a glowing orange sunrise !  

You ALL are the greatest !
No doubt about it !
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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